Marrian_Garotti [wikasalim]

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Character: Marrian_Garotti

Story:

 

Marrian Garotti

 

           Marrian Garotti was born on March 1, 1995 in Madagascar, Antananarivo. Marrian's father was a successful contractor named Christopher Garotti. While his mother is a successful career woman in the field of singing called Audrey Olivia, Marrian has a younger sister named Vanessa Garotti and an older brother named Garlyn Garotti. Their family life was very harmonious and beautiful, but everything changed when their parents died from an airplane accident. Hearing the news, the three of them felt very sad, Marrian, who was then 20 years old, finally decided to leave the city of Madagascar to get rid of his trauma. He decided to go to America precisely in the city of Los Santos, knowing that his two brothers wanted to come with him.

 

       The three of them finally got to the city of Los Santos after getting a few obstacles. Their lives in this city are very heavy, the three of them live in a low-class apartment and work almost every day to meet their life needs. Garlyn and Vanessa work as mechanics in this city, while Marrian wants to get a better job than his two siblings. Almost all the work he tried, Marriar once became a farmer and truck driver at a depot which made him have many new friends. But he felt that the wages he had were still not enough to support himself and his two siblings. So from that Marrian tried to apply for a job with a transportation service provider company.

 

        Long story short, the lives of all three of them have now started to improve because both brothers, namely Garlyn and Vanessa, got a second job. They became road cleaners and garbage collectors, although with very little income. Marrian also got a bright spot on the application he gave to the company providing transportation services. Marrian is now very happy because he has succeeded in forgetting the feeling of his trauma to the airplane, which once made him always scared because he returned to remember the accident of his parents. now Marrian and his brothers are trying to be successful people in the city of Los Santos by working diligently and enthusiastically.

 

 

 

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Hi wikasalim! Setelah saya mereview character story anda, berikut hal yang harus diperbaiki dalam membuat character story;

 

1. Atur posisi setiap paragraf menjadi "Align Left", dan jangan lupa untuk memberi spaces ke dalam di setiap awal paragraf, contoh;

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2 minutes ago, NotAdmin said:

Hi wikasalim! Setelah saya mereview character story anda, berikut hal yang harus diperbaiki dalam membuat character story;

 

Tolong quote aja bang, dimana letak salah saya, karena yang tidak mengerti saya translate langsung.

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Just now, ??????????? said:

Tolong quote aja bang, dimana letak salah saya, karena yang tidak mengerti saya translate langsung.

 

Ubah tata letak teks paragraf anda, itu kan anda nulisnya dari tengah (Center), ubah menjadi ke kiri (Align Left) dan juga di beri spaces kedalam seperti contoh yang saya berikan.

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1 minute ago, NotAdmin said:

 

Ubah tata letak teks paragraf anda, itu kan anda nulisnya dari tengah (Center), ubah menjadi ke kiri (Align Left) dan juga di beri spaces kedalam seperti contoh yang saya berikan.

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