Ernes1979 Posted May 19, 2019 Posted May 19, 2019 (edited) Character: Michiko_Okuda Story: Born on April 12, 199X, in London, England. Michiko is the youngest son of Vera Abramov and Alfie Pierce. Michiko moved to Las Venturas with his family in 199X in a tough neighbourhood on the eastern side of Venturas, where his parents opened a bar/restaurant that became a hangout for local mobsters. Michiko caught the attention of one of the local mob figures, "Tommy the Jew", and soon became involved with the organization he was representing, helping to push cocaine throughout the neighbourhood. In 20XX, his father died suddenly leaving his mother to raise their three kids. That same year, he dropped out of High School when he was a sophomore and spent most of his time engaging in petty crime and working for his family's restaurant. At the age of 16, he earned his first arrest after attempting to steal a Laptop from a local store. He was fined and placed on probation. The arrest did nothing to curb Michiko's ever-increasing criminal activities though. But small-time activity was no longer enough and at the age of 19 after Tommy's death, he moves out of Venturas and sets his eyes on Los Santos, moving in a town in its vicinity, Blue Berry, where he finds work at a local meat-shop, owned by one Lawrence Seratta, one of Philly's own, a local LS mob figure. Michiko arrived in Blueberry in the summer of 20XX. He was told to be smart and get a decent job and stay out of trouble but Michiko saw how real money was made on the streets, through drugs, he was able to earn more in a day than he would in a month. With each ensuing crime, he became more cautious, fearing jail more than anything. Michiko's rise through the world of organized crime was bizarre. After getting his ass handed to him by his boss for skipping work, Michiko plans his revenge but never has the chance to put his plans in motion. As he was driving to Blueberry, planning to murder Lawrence in his meat-shop and take over. Michiko's phone begins to ring and he is told that Lawrence has been found dead, most likely killed by one of his partners in crime, from Philly. Michiko uses this opportunity and calls Lloyd Burton the very same night. A rising star in the criminal underworld, Michiko had support and encouragement from Lloyd Burton a drug lord from Crenshaw and so begins a business partnership that'd take Michiko to the top. Michiko unexpectedly, within a couple of weeks since his arrival, went from a small-time dealer in BlueBerry to working for the biggest dope pusher on the East Side. To fuel his drug business, which included marijuana, cocaine and heroin, Michiko starts working with anyone and everyone who'd be able to push some product his way, from Cartel members, Italian mobsters or your average corner pushers. He also engaged in other money-making schemes, including boosting cars with the Russian Mafia and a window-installing racket for city-owned projects to launder his illegal profits. As his reputation grew, he was forced to start carrying a pistol to protect himself. Michiko already had some experience with handguns but he never had a reason to use one. During his early days in LS, Michiko went on various hits more or less successful to build a reputation for himself, that he isn't someone to fuck with including the hit on his best friend, Jacen Lockhart and his cheating girlfriend, at the time. While raking in lots of cash from his various criminal efforts, he worked hard to avoid attracting the attention of the authorities. He always made sure to have his meetings in isolated places, he'd used only pay-phones to set up meetings, to prevent his comments from being caught on tape. Michiko soon became the leader of a crew in Market, a multi-racial organized crime group that operates under Pierce's leadership. The group is known for their notorious distribution ring of both narcotics, firearms and various rackets all across the city. Although the group is controlling a small block sized area in Market yet operates all around Los Santos. The group is said to have a strong relationship with other organizations led by the Burton DTO. The group disappeared between the months of February and March for unknown reasons rumours say a violent feud between the group and an unknown organization occurred, Michiko stuck out his neck for a close friend of his and agreed to help him deal with his former organization, with one condition, he'd have to work for him from then on. Later on, around early April, the group returned operating around the streets of Los Santos. There's almost little to no information about who-ever runs the show in the Market Crew to the public, whilst Michiko continues to this day to earn a fortune through his drug deals, investing more and more money into legitimate businesses trying to continue to stay away from the Police's radar, managing so far to this date to stay out of their way. Saya Ernes1979 selaku pemilik account UCP EuisCitraWahyuni bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Michiko_Okuda) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 22, 2019 by Ernes1979
dreamlife Posted May 19, 2019 Posted May 19, 2019 Tolong gunakan alur cerita yang jelas, diparagraf pertama seperti tidak nyambung ceritanya. 7 hours ago, Ernes1979 said: Dia membawanya keluar untuk berlatih dan melihat keterampilannya. Ternyata dia adalah 'pembuat senjata' yang luar biasa, dan dia pergi ke kompetisi senapan. Contohnya ini, dan masih kurang dari 300 kata juga.
dreamlife Posted May 21, 2019 Posted May 21, 2019 6 hours ago, Ernes1979 said: oke siap Belum di perbaiki itu yang saya quote.
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