Fikun_Furgenagoveh[UserNam]

[Kagawa FIkun]

Character: Fikun_Furgenagoveh

Origin: Vinewood

Story: 

 

       

     A man named Fikun Furgenagoveh was born in 1888. Furgen  and his parents live in Vinewood. His father is a lawyer and that is why they have money

person with many ideas. He finished school with high were proud of him. when he was 22 years old, his parents bought a good apartment for him. he has

no job and he still does not know what he will do for the rest of his life. every day he checks newspapers to find work. then he saw an ad from a sim

called Los santos dl.  It is one of the biggest Sim companies around los santos. Furgen always wants a big challenge and this is what he wants. Theidea is to

company build a Licensing company that has everything driving, sailing, flying  and weapons permits.once he can,he writes down all of his  ideas. names,

 

     Buildings, cars, planes, ships and more . He told his father about his plan and his father began to believe in Furgen. He likes his plans and Furgen makes

his father proud. Since this time Furgen and his father started building a licensing company. They asked for  Information from each building available a

the city hall. and finally, they found the perfect building with a perfect parking lot in the center of Los Santos. His father bought the building with his hard

earned money. but his father told Furgen Hat it was worth it. afcourse Furgen had thought of a name.Los santos  Liberty City, Los santos license company

proud and proud. Furgen takes care of many advertisements and sooner or later he had several people. After several years he became the second best

licensed company. but after that, he had more people in Los Santos. sailing flying and weapons licenses. After several years passed, he became a Famous

and important person of los santos. In 1918 he met a beautiful girl named jessica hanson. He is 27 years old and she lived in San fierro. After 2

 

      Years they decided to spent the rest of their lives together. they married in 1920. It was a huge and expensive afcourse they thought about having a

child and their first baby came in 1924  It was a boy and they gave their child the wedding. name Charles. they decided to stay with one baby because

Furgen was a Los Santos only child. In 1946 Charles ramble was all grown up. he was 22 years old and he had just Furgen always  wanted that successful

l lawyer like his dad grandpa died. He was 90 years old and dead. Of the Los Santos Liberty City. He had a gunshot in his stomach and one in the head.

the Los Santos Police Departement speaks about a robbery because his wallet was missing. but no one knows what happened that night on the 23rd of

october. same graveyard as his father. Afcoure it was Charles duty take care of Los Santos Liberty City. years has been past and Charles of the Los Santos

Liberty City but he isn’t the same active as he was 30 years aga. Los Santos Liberty City also reached the to name of 

 

 

 

 

       

I am Kagawa FIkun as the owner of the account UCP UserNam is willing if my Character mentioned above (Fikun_Furgenagoveh) is banned permanently if the character story I made above is a plagiarism from someone else's story.

[$Royalty$]

 



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To Mr/Ms ID, UserNam
I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Tidak usah dikasih Quote

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

HoA UCP ID,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

[Kagawa FIkun]

is this still wrong?

Edited May 8, 2019 by Kagawa FIkun

[$Royalty$]

Masih salah, panjangin kalimatnya menjadi paragraf.

[Kagawa FIkun]

19 hours ago, Nezactra18 said:

Masih salah, panjangin kalimatnya menjadi paragraf.

extend what isn't it too long if it's too long it's not a paragraph?

[$Royalty$]

Iya panjangin kalimatnya.

[Kagawa FIkun]

3 hours ago, Nezactra18 said:

Iya panjangin kalimatnya.

jadi 3 Paragraf ?

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Kagawa FIkun]

Oit Kaka saya mau tanya Udah buka belom.

Hhehheh Sebelom kasih jawaban Bukan dulu okay...

[Fikunaditiya]

naw ajarin gua dong gua gak tau ini gimana

[Kagawa FIkun]

lah atuh lu gak jelas itu bikin nya coba lu benerin dikit ge kata katanya w aja gak tau lu itu bikin cerita apaan

[Fikunaditiya]

lah naw lu juga bikin cerita apaan, kalo w mah kan gak tau Paragraf doang nah lu tau paragraf gak kasih contoh w

[Kagawa FIkun]

Tuh Paragraf

 

Setiap Paragraf Depan itu Besar ,Nama ,Daerah itu Paragraf

[Fikunaditiya]

He...Alah gitu mah tau tapi katanya salah bukan kek gitu Naw

[Kagawa FIkun]

Hilih dibilangin nya ngeyel udah ikutin aja kek gitu...., eh tapi jan copas punya w 

[Fikunaditiya]

Hilih pelit banget dah