no_life Posted April 29, 2019 Posted April 29, 2019 (edited) Character Name: Ashton BradleyOrigin: United States of America Story: Ashton was born on December 12, 1995, in Stanford Health Care-Stanford Hospital, he's born from conglomerate family and considered as rich guy, his future was guaranteed to continue leading the family business. Bradley Family has a business called BreadTalk and it's provided in world-wide commercial. Conglomerates are a combination of two or more companies that establish different overall businesses that fall under one group of companies, usually involving a parent company and several subsidies. Often, a conglomerate is a multi-industry company. Conglomerates are often large and multinational. As conglomerate family, of course they educated Ashton seriously to lead Bradley Family business in the future. When Ashton was 14 years old, his family decided Ashton should enter Carnegie Vanguard High School, because that was the best High School in his country. When Ashton was 18 years old, he decided to enter Stanford University, he joined Economics Faculty at Stanford, he also got the scholarship after became the champion of National Economics Challenge by the Council for Economic Education, he's one of the winners on that contest. After 2 years of studying as a Stanford student, he finally graduated with a great score, he started to continue his Family business, BreadTalk on 2 days after graduation. As family owner doesn't mean Ashton will be prompted instantly to became Manager or anything else, he started from Zero in BreadTalk company, promoted and grown up slowly are his duty. After 3 months became a worker in BreadTalk, something 'big' happens, someone just burned the Headquarters of BreadTalk, Bradley Family lost everything inside the Headquarters, but they still have subdivision in world-wide country, but that doesn't matter, the main office, "Headquarter" has fallen. A big loss, 70% property of BreadTalk are gone. They almost lost everything that important for the future of BreadTalk Company. There's no way except they're selling all of the logos, property, and human resources to another company that will buy the rest of BreadTalk Properties, and it'll bring the profit back for Bradley Family. Saya no_life selaku pemilik account UCP RobbyAlvianJM bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ashton_Bradley) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited April 29, 2019 by no_life Fixed Format.
$Royalty$ Posted April 30, 2019 Posted April 30, 2019 PENDING : Cukup satu foto aja, kata kamu kurang dari 300 kata. Perbaiki ya
no_life Posted April 30, 2019 Author Posted April 30, 2019 1 hour ago, Nezactra18 said: PENDING : Cukup satu foto aja, kata kamu kurang dari 300 kata. Perbaiki ya Terimakasih untuk balasannya, admin Nezactra18. Tapi sebenarnya Character Story saya sudah melebihi 300 kata, yaitu mencapai 333 kata, ini buktinya: Silahkan di cek lagi admin. Saya menggunakan banyak gambar untuk memperjelas Character Story, saya juga pernah melihat Character Story yang menggunakan banyak gambar, dan itu boleh saja, asal terususun rapih *menurut saya. Terimakasih.
$Royalty$ Posted April 30, 2019 Posted April 30, 2019 Hi, Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu:
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