Benjamin Adkins [Goalll]

[$Babep M$]

Karakter :  Benjamin Adkins

Cerita : 

 

 

 

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Benjamin Adkins was born March 16, 1990 in American Samoa, Afono. Benjamin was born to 2 brothers and a respectable family in his city. But Benjamin was cared for by his own grandmother since the age of 15 who lived in San Andreas, Los Santos, vinewood for a long time.

Benjamin began his career as an introduction to burgers, and gradually collected the money he earned to pursue his dream of becoming a successful entrepreneur. Even though his parents were respected, and had a lot of money, Benjamin did not want to use what his parents owned. Thanks to his grandmother, Benjamin became a useful person. Right on February 24, 2014, Benjamin's grandmother died, Benjamin lived alone.

Before he died, grandmother Benjamin said: Everyone in this world has a story to tell. Don't judge others before you really know them. Because the reality that happened might surprise you.

Benjamin knew, the way forward he would leave, even though it wasn't too far but steep and winding, and furthermore there were dark caves he had to go through, but after he could pass through the darkness, there would be light, a beautiful and very fertile place. He must like it. There, Benjamin certainly can live well as desired.

When Benjamin gets obstacles, obstacles, and problems usually get discouraged or upset. That condition makes Benjamin a stronger person, as long as he can motivate himself.

The simple meaning of success has been practiced by successful humans centuries ago until now in accordance with their respective fields.

So to achieve maximum success, Benjamin does not need a complicated blank theory of theory. Know the value you want to achieve and take action!

To continue his life, Benjamin worked harder to pursue his goals, Benjamin also changed his profession to become a truck driver. Now Benjamin still lives in a simple and prosperous life.

 

People who are passive and lazy to work, actually do not realize that they have lost some of their self-esteem, which further results in their lives becoming backward. Benjamin was very concerned about the lazy people.

 

 

Saya Babep M selaku pemilik akun UCP  Goalll menerima jika Karakter saya yang disebut di atas ( Benjamin Adkins ) dibanned permanen jika karakter cerita yang saya buat di atas berisi plagiat dari cerita milik orang lain
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[$Babep M$]

40 minutes ago, RizalKoplak said:

Hi,

Saya telah review character story yang kamu buat dan menemukan bahwa story kamu belum memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah DENIED chacater story ini dengan alasan di bawah ini:

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• BY Dari budi, budi pere on duty admin karna pleernya abis gue buntungin karena plerrnya bengkok
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Dimohon untuk menggunakan saran yang saya berikan di atas untuk memperbaiki character story kamu agar memenuhi kriteria yang diminta. Setelah kamu memperbaiki story kamu, saya atau staff JG:RP lain akan review ulang dalam kurun waktu 24 jam. Jika kami belum mereply di story kamu, mohon tunggu sampai thread ini sampai di PAGE 2 sebelum kamu mem-bump thread ini. Semoga berhasil di kesempatan berikutnya!

 

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To Mr/Ms Benjamin,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Perbaiki lagi formatnya, pakai format seperti yang lain aja bisa di check di Active Character Story.
2. Kurang dari 300 kata tambahkan lagi.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

[$Babep M$]

1 hour ago, edwinnoviann said:



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To Mr/Ms Benjamin,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Perbaiki lagi formatnya, pakai format seperti yang lain aja bisa di check di Active Character Story.
2. Kurang dari 300 kata tambahkan lagi.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

Re-edited Mr/Ms Edwinnoviann

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To Mr/Ms Benjamin,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

 

1. Kurang dari 300 kata tambahkan lagi.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

[$Babep M$]

7 hours ago, edwinnoviann said:



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To Mr/Ms Benjamin,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

 

1. Kurang dari 300 kata tambahkan lagi.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

Re-edited,  sudah 300 kata. Tolong lebih detail menghitung dan mengoreksinya.

[$edwinnovian$]

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To Mr/Ms Benjamin,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toAPPROVE your request. And, your character story will be moved and activated immidiately in  24 hours, if in 24 hours you still cannot access paycheck feature, please do contact one of JG:RP Staff in the game for further action.

Sincerely,

Heper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

 

[$edwinnovian$]

Hi,

Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu: