[PENDING]Steve Wang [Soldado31]

[Soldado31]

Character: Steven Wang

Story:

 

                Steven Wang was born at Los Santos from Chinese father and American mother. His father is an owner of a big company and his mother is a social service activist. His parents are very busy  that he became a child who lacked of parent love and attention. Because of that Steve grew as a naughty kid but on the other side he is a kind child. His good character was revealed by his mother who was a social activist.

                When he entered Junior High School his parents became more busy and rarely returned to home especially his father. This causes Steven to be less attention and education from his partens.  To distract his loneliness  he rarely goes home after school and prefers to hangout with his friends.  When he was entering Senior High School his father’s company went bankrupt which caused him to sell all of his family asset and owe people a lot. With a deteriorating economic situation Steve's family was in a state of chaos. His mother and father often fight which finally made Steve worse. Until finally his family really fell into poverty.

                With his poor family Steve never gets pocket money. This causes Steve to earn money with things that are not proper. He racketeered student at the school, he is also willing to do anything to get money. Starting from sharing the exam answer key that was stolen by him until be a paid thugs at his school. Steve also joined a group of bad boys at his schools. Due to his courage and actions when he went up to the third grade he was appointed as a leader of a bad boys group at his school. He earn lot of money because of his group that oftenly racketeered the juniors and deposited 30 percents of it to him.

                A few days after his school graduation Steve’s father was kidnapped. When he was found by the police he died with his organs disappearing. The police concluded that Steve’s father was kidnapped by crime organization and being human traffecked to replace all debts that cannot be paid.  Luckily Steve has an education insurance so he can continued his eduaction to University at San Fierro. He and his mother moved to Steve’s uncle house at San Fierro. Steve’s uncle is brother of his father. In the University, Steve oftenly hang around with his departement’s friends included senior.

                One day...when Steve arrived at his Uncle house. He found that his mother was being raped by his uncle, saw that Steve can’t control his anger. He took a knife from kitchen and tried to stabbed his uncle. Steve’s uncle realized there is a knife on Steve’s hand so his uncle ran away exit the house. Steve chased him and stabbed the knife on his uncle’s back neck. Because of that tragedy his uncle passed away.

 The neighbors who saw that called the police.Not long after the police arrived and arrested Steve. Because of that Steve dropped out from his college. When he was in the prison, he got a news that his mother was passed away because of an illness.

                Know of his condition and background, Steve’s High School friend, Dave. Picked him up when he was released from the prison and offered him to join a triad at which is leaded by his senior as well as his hanged out friend in the college. Because of his experience Steve is trusted to do crucial things in the Triad and he also got the trust of his partner and the leader.

               

 

 

 

Saya Soldado31 selaku pemilik account UCP Soldado31 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Steven Wang) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited January 18, 2019 by Soldado31

[$edwinnovian$]



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To Mr/Ms Steven,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Perbaiki lagi paragraphnya.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

[Soldado31]

11 hours ago, edwinnoviann said:



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To Mr/Ms Steven,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toPENDING your request.

Reasoning for said denial is listed below:

1. Perbaiki lagi paragraphnya.

I wish you the best of luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.



 

Edited

[$edwinnovian$]

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To Mr/Ms Steve,

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision toAPPROVE your request. And, your character story will be moved and activated immidiately in  24 hours, if in 24 hours you still cannot access paycheck feature, please do contact one of JG:RP Staff in the game for further action.

Sincerely,

Helper Team edwinnovian,
Jogjagamers Roleplay Administrative Team.

 

[$edwinnovian$]

Hi,

Saya telah mereview character story kamu dan menemukan bahwa story kamu sudah memenuhi kriteria yang kami berikan. Dengan itu kami telah ACCEPT character story yang kamu buat. Mohon ikuti panduan di bawah ini untuk mengaktifkan character story kamu: