pending Thomas_Crawford [Wierz]

[Ahmad Wisnu]

Thomas Crawford

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One day, a child named Thomas Crawford was born in San Fierro on January 1st, 1994. Thomas was the only child in his family, born to his father, Arthur Redhawk, and his mother, Ellena Gabriella. Thomas went to a vocational school focusing on mechanics because he was deeply passionate about motorcycle engines. He dreamed of owning a Chopper and a Trail bike, but unfortunately, he couldn't afford them as he came from an underprivileged family. Nevertheless, Thomas was determined to fight for his dream vehicles.

 

 

After graduating, Thomas wanted to move to the city of Los Santos in search of a decent job. However, his mother did not allow him to leave. Thomas's father tried to explain the situation to her so that Thomas could get permission to move to Los Santos, but his mother still refused. Thomas then approached his mother and tried to give her a clear explanation. After a while, she finally understood and agreed to her son's decision, even though it was heavy on her heart to let him go. A few days later, Thomas packed his bags and said goodbye to his parents to relocate to Los Santos.

 

 

Thomas arrived in Los Santos in the late afternoon. He contacted his old friend, Jack Preston, to pick him up at the train station. After waiting for a short while, Jack arrived, called Thomas, and waited for him. They both headed straight to Jack's house located in Marina. Exhausted, Thomas fell asleep immediately in Jack's room and slept very soundly. A few hours later, Jack woke Thomas up for dinner. Thomas got up and had dinner with Jack while chatting about his reasons for coming to Los Santos.

 

 

After hearing Thomas's goals, Jack offered him a job at a workshop. Without thinking twice, Thomas accepted the offer, seeing it as an opportunity to gain work experience and cover his living expenses in Los Santos. Over time, Thomas succeeded; he became a reliable mechanic at the workshop and was eventually promoted to manager. He kept his success in Los Santos a secret from his parents, though he never forgot to regularly send money back home to his father and mother. Ultimately, Thomas successfully bought his dream vehicles: a Chopper and a Trail bike.

 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Lebih dari 1 bulan tapi jarang maskot waktu itu lagi sibuk sekarang baru sempet 

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Saya Ahmad Wisnu selaku pemilik account UCP Wierz bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Thomas Crawford) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited 1 hour ago by Ahmad Wisnu

[Jeypamungkas12]

 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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