$Rohjahat03$ Posted March 8 Posted March 8 UCP Name: CandraX3 Old Character: Rhymes Trevigne Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/371617-rhymes_trevigne-candrax3/ New Character: Navaja_Tyquan Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Mexican African-American Reason for name change request: Mengubah alur roleplay Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC jail: Spoiler /myid: Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler One day in the dark night and heavy breathing in Dilimore, a man named Rhymes Trevinge came who had just parked his car at the nearest restaurant where he lived, because there was no restaurant close to his house Rhymes tried to buy beer which was strategically located in the middle of the road, and wanted to try drinking beer for the first time because in his life Rhymes had never drunk liquor, when he was close to the beer shop, Rhymes turned off his vehicle's engine and got out of his Impala, Rhymes felt his breath was heavy and the night was so cold but because he could no longer hold back the thirst in his throat Rhymes rushed into the shop. Just as he was about to enter the beer shop, Rhymes wanted to vomit when he smelled it from outside. Rhymes had entered the shop and immediately ordered the lightest drink, namely "Vodka" and immediately paid for "1.83 $ per liter of water" because he didn't know the types of drinks he just chose randomly but didn't think about his future situation, Rhymes drank the Vodka that Rhymes ordered with a small mini glass cup "1.9 oz" Rhymes was a little drunk Rhymes immediately got out of the place and got into his Impala vehicle but when he had only been in the car for a few minutes Rhymes saw a suspicious Stranger who had been looking at him Rhymes turned his gaze away but. After a few minutes of looking at him, the stranger approached Rhymes and asked, "Do you want a new job?" Since it was just him and the stranger, Rhymes asked what job you mean, right? The stranger got out of his vehicle and talked to him. The stranger asked Rhymes meaningfully, then asked, "Do you want to work with me as an illegal courier?" Rhymes, who was very poor and didn't have much money, tried to get the stranger to agree. The stranger told Rhymes to follow him to pick up the illegal goods behind the white apartment building in front of the bar. But what he didn't expect was that he was tricked by the stranger and the stranger took the baseball bat he had hidden, the stranger asked for all his money and BoA "Bank of America" ATM Card because he didn't want his money and assets taken he tried to fight the stranger who he considered a robber but because of the hard baton, Rhymes fell unconscious and was immediately killed by the robber and took all his assets including his vehicle impala key, the robber continued to beat him until he was unconscious until foam came out of his mouth. CK Screenshots: Bukti
FilthyKikz Posted March 8 Posted March 8 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
FilthyKikz Posted March 9 Posted March 9 Tolong hilangkan tenant dulu dengan menggunakan /cancel tenant di ruangan yang kamu sewa. Serta nanti edit lagi SSnya agar tidak terpotong.
$Rohjahat03$ Posted March 9 Author Posted March 9 Baik min, izin menjawab seperti nya tenant tidak pengaruh min karena itu bukan bagian dari property kita, bisa di liat di ck saya sebelum nya di profie. Terimakasih dan akan saya edit.
FilthyKikz Posted March 10 Posted March 10 Alur CK tidak boleh mati karena benda tumpul seperti baseball bat.
FilthyKikz Posted March 10 Posted March 10 Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one.
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