$jiee$ Posted March 7 Posted March 7 UCP Name: trojans Old Character: Maxence_Lemieux Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/307345-maxence_lemieux-trojans/ New Character: Tadeo_Esparza Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United States of America Reason for name change request: Untuk memenuhi syarat masuk FnG Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti CK Story: Spoiler Maxence left the casino with a thick envelope of cash tucked into the front pocket of his white shirt. Three hours at the blackjack table gave him enough money to finally clear his debts. Instead of going straight home to hide the cash, he pulled out his phone. He called Olivier to meet him and called Irisheena to head over to their usual bar. The drive across town was easy. Traffic was light. Maxence rolled his windows down, thinking only about the money in his pocket and how he was going to pay off what he owed. He never noticed the dark sedan following his car. He was too focused on the cashier’s cage to see the three men watching him. They tailed him right out of the parking lot and parked in the alley behind the bar. By the time Maxence and Olivier leaned at a table with their drinks, the attackers were already walking through the front door. They moved straight toward the booth without a word. Maxence barely registered the man standing over him before a switchblade flashed under the dim lights. He shoved the man back, trying to twist away, but the blade caught him anyway. It sliced clean through his white shirt and cut deep into his ribs. Olivier lunged across the table at the attacker before Maxence even realized he was bleeding. The fight was fast and brutal. Maxence grabbed his bleeding side just in time to see Olivier take a heavy hit to the head and drop to the floor. Panic hit him. He shouted his brother's name and stumbled forward to help, but the attacker slammed him hard against the booth. Rough hands grabbed the torn fabric of his white shirt, reaching directly into the front pocket and ripping the envelope of cash away. In seconds, the two men sprinted out the back exit into the alley. Maxence felt his body, his hands covered in blood from his own wound. Irisheena dropped down right next to Maxence, completely ignoring the stolen money, and pressed her shirt hard against his ribs to stop the bleeding. He had come back to Los Santos to fix his problems, but looking at Olivier unconscious on the floor, he realized he had just made everything worse. CK Screenshots: Bukti
FilthyKikz Posted March 7 Posted March 7 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$jiee$ Posted March 7 Author Posted March 7 2 minutes ago, FilthyKikz said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Sudah Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Perampokan dan Pembunuhan Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? Sudah
FilthyKikz Posted March 8 Posted March 8 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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