calonpenghunisurga Posted March 6 Posted March 6 UCP Name: gazgazgaz Old Character: Arkell Knox Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/368641-arkell_knox-gazgazgaz/#comment-3746326 New Character: Adam Hua Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: chinese Reason for name change request: menghapus crime record, mengganti culture Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail Spoiler /myid Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler At night somewhere in the city of Los Santos, there was a young man named Arkell Knox who was just hanging around Las Colinas, at that time he was very bored and there was nothing he could do at that time except play with his friends, but at that time his friends were not in town, and Arkell had the idea to buy a weapon that he would buy from someone to show off to his friends. Finally, he walked towards his car to go around the whole city of los santos and look for someone who sells the goods he wants at that time, but in the middle of his journey he changed his mind to buy drugs instead of weapons, and also he wanted to remove his plate so as not to be tracked by the police or detectives, after he removed his plate, finally he continued his journey to look for someone who sells the goods he wants. In the middle of his journey, while listening to the radio in his car, he did not see any cars passing by on the road, which made him suspicious, and at that time there were also many gangs who were fighting with other gangs, so Arkell was afraid for his safety, because the police could also be with him and arrest him even though he was innocent, but on the other hand he saw someone who was silent on the side of the road, then he tried to approach him and talk to him. After having a short conversation with the person, Arkell asked whether the person was selling illegal goods such as drugs or anything that could relieve his stress, and the person answered yes, but at that time Arkell had bad intentions where Arkell tried to take the goods away if given and did not pay for it, in the end Arkell was taken to a small and quiet alley, where he was apparently trapped by the person and his friend, Arkell was beaten by the dealer's friend until he almost fainted. After that, Arkell's body was dragged and put into a car to cover his tracks and not be caught by the police or detectives, Arkell was taken to a place that was unfamiliar to him, in that place Arkell was stepped on, beaten, tortured until he was truly dead, so that the person could remove traces of Arkell's body, finally the two people left the scene of the incident, and Arkell was left alone there and only left a few bruises on his body, finally after a few weeks Arkell's body was found and Arkell was declared dead at that time, and the killer is still a fugitive until now CK Screenshots: Bukti
FilthyKikz Posted March 7 Posted March 7 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
calonpenghunisurga Posted March 7 Author Posted March 7 1. udah 2.tidak 3.sudah 4.dijebak oleh penjual senjata narkoba dan dibunuh 5.sudah
FilthyKikz Posted March 7 Posted March 7 Alur CK tidak boleh mati karena benda tumpul seperti baseball bat.
FilthyKikz Posted March 7 Posted March 7 Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one.
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