ExxoL Posted March 2 Posted March 2 (edited) Ricardo Fuentes Ricardo Fuentes, born on January 16, 1998, in San Bernardino, is a man passionate about motorcycles and the region's iconic motorcycle club. Ricardo Fuentes, also known as Fuego, is a friendly and humble person. Although he was orphaned at the age of 7, that didn't rule out the possibility of him being a failure. His father and mother died in a car accident on Route 69. Since their deaths, poor Fuego felt lost and unable to find his identity, as he was still very young. He was raised by his uncle, who was then part of the San Bernardino chapter of the Bandit Outlaw Motorcycle gang. From then on, Fuego learned a lot from his uncle, as motorcycles and other things were his true passion. Several years later, at the age of 19, Fuego officially became part of the Bandidos Outlaw MC, following in his uncle's footsteps and successfully joining the club. During his time in the club, Fuego demonstrated a remarkable personality, prioritizing loyalty above all else to the club and its senior members. However, not long after his peak, a few months later, Fuego's uncle was diagnosed with tuberculosis, which resulted in his death. Fuego was devastated to see his uncle, the man who raised him, die from the illness. The entire club mourned his passing. However, this is where the biggest problems began. Several months after Fuego's uncle's passing, the club continued to goes as usual. Fuego attended church events and went on afternoon rides with the other members. Everything was going smoothly until a rats within the club destroyed the club from within, inciting the President and all the other influential members to their demise. One night, during a table meeting, the President suddenly proposed robbing a cargo truck filled with engine components and valuables to sell for the club's needs. This sparked a heated debate among the members at the table meeting that night, as this was a rarely move for the club. After further investigation, it turned out the President had been instigated by the rats, a dangerous and manipulative man. The night ended according to the President's wishes, even though many members disagreed with this terrible idea. Several days passed, and the day of the cargo truck robbery arrived. Several members, with minimal preparation, went to the robbery location to hijack a cargo truck traveling on Route 69 at night. The club's van was launched, and all members prepared to begin their operation. When the truck was spotted about 500 meters from their waiting location, the truck sped away at high speed, and the members successfully hijacked it. Shortly before the police, who were already 10 steps ahead of the Bandidos, arrived, waiting for them out front. Fuego, who was assigned to transport the van containing the stolen components from the cargo truck, was shocked to see a spike trap in front of him, accompanied by police sirens in front and behind. Fuego's losing control, swerved to the side of the road to avoid the trap. The car lost its balance and rolled right onto the side of the road, in the middle of the Route 69 desert. Fuego and his friend, who were inside the van, managed to escape by taking cover beside the overturned van, readying their weapons as the police were already charging at them, just before the other members arrived to rescue Fuego, who was surrounded by the police. A gunfight was inevitable, and at least seven club members were killed in the incident, including Fuego's friend who was beside him during the shootout. All the bandits immediately retreated, including Fuego, who managed to escape the scene after overthrowing at least three armed police units. When the members arrived at their clubhouse, the unexpected happened that very night, the President had been killed by the fucking traitor, whom they had not suspected was an undercover cop. Fuego and several other members who survived the night immediately pursued the undercover cop, who had not yet left the club. A second shootout in one night was inevitable. Fuego and several members managed to dominate and corner the traitor and undercover cop, and were killed by Fuego, with atleast two shots to the head and chest. Fuego, sensing the situation was in terrible, immediately left the location and invited the remaining Bandit crew to join him. However, they refused, claiming they had gone too far and wanted to atone for their past actions by facing reality. This statement was in stark contrast to Fuego, who still wanted to live and seek new experiences he had never had before. Just before they shook hands and embraced for the last time, Fuego left San Bernardino County without packing enough supplies, planning to head to San Andreas on his motorcycle. Fuego traveled alone that night, still struggling to calm down and reflecting on what had happened a time ago, at least before he arrived in San Andreas, or more precisely, when he chose Los Santos as his new home. Several years have passed since that dark incident, and Fuego has been unable to forget it. He is now a lone wolf roaming Los Santos, a city with many dark stories. He works as a street cleaner in East Los Santos and often spends his nights drinking at his favorite bar, Freeman's Bar. He works during the day to earn money, sometimes spending it all on drinking in one night. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: hanya 1 : rxsa Account Forum yang saya miliki: ExxoL Saya ExxoL selaku pemilik account UCP rxsa bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ricardo Fuentes) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited March 4 by ExxoL
Nadeez Posted March 2 Posted March 2 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
ExxoL Posted March 2 Author Posted March 2 (edited) Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) 1. Tidak 2. 4 - 6 bulan 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah Edited March 2 by ExxoL
Nadeez Posted March 3 Posted March 3 Jawab dengan JUJUR! Apakah kamu memiliki akun UCP lain selain dari rxsa?
Nadeez Posted March 3 Posted March 3 Apakah dalam pembuatan character story ini kamu menggunakan bantuan dari AI?
ExxoL Posted March 3 Author Posted March 3 Iya, saya menggunakan sedikit bantuan AI dalam menentukan kata kata yang baik dan benar, tapi untuk cerita yang saya buat itu pure karangan saya tanpa bantuan AI.
Nadeez Posted March 4 Posted March 4 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @ExxoL, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons: Tolong dibuat menjadi 3 paragraf dengan format yang rapi (rata kiri-kanan). Nama character story pastikan taruh di tengah tidak di pinggir. I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story. Sincerely, @Nadeez JG:RP Helper Team
Nadeez Posted March 5 Posted March 5 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @ExxoL, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Nadeez JG:RP Helper Team
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