$Brotherschap03$ Posted February 28 Posted February 28 (edited) UCP Name: SamsiCurut Old Character: Derrick_Diagne Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/364912-derrick_diagne-samsicurut/#comment-3708660 New Character Kellin_Campbell Gender: Perempuan (Female) Origin: USA Reason for name change request: pengen coba RP di FnG pakai karakter cewek Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti MP Myid Jail Ooc Jail CK Story: Spoiler Derrick Diagne is a relatively poor young man. He needs money to buy an apartment so he can live comfortably in the city of Los Santos. Derrick frequently looks for jobs and applies to companies. Unfortunately, Derrick is continuously rejected by all the companies he applies to. He doesn't give up looking for work so he can use the money to meet his needs. While walking around looking for a job, he sees a Vespa in front of a wealthy man's house, which makes his dirty mind think of a way to steal the Vespa. He sells the stolen motorcycle and gets a lot of money, allowing him to rent an apartment. However, this doesn't get him accepted into any company. In this incident, Derrick caught a CCTV camera right in front of the house where the Vespa was parked. The owner of the house and Vespa is a very wealthy man with an enthusiasm for collecting expensive Vespas. He was furious when he saw one of his motorcycles stolen. He then searches for the identity of the thief, who is Derrick Diagne himself. A few days passed, and he easily learned Derrick's identity due to his extensive network of acquaintances. He decided to punish the person who stole his Vespa by hiring a hitman to kill Derrick without his intervention. As time passed, the hitman disguised himself as Derrick's neighbor. His method was so effective that Derrick felt no threat when the hitman was around. One day, Derrick was relaxing in front of his apartment, enjoying the morning air. The hitman, who had already planned the morning's schedule, drove straight to Derrick's apartment in his car. He tricked Derrick by luring him to visit the hitman's acquaintance, a company boss. Derrick innocently followed the hitman's instructions and was then taken to an empty hut in the woods near the city. There, he immediately led the hitman inside and then launched his attack, blindly killing Derrick with the weapon he had prepared beforehand. CK Screenshots: Bukti Edited March 2 by Syifa03
FilthyKikz Posted March 7 Posted March 7 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$Brotherschap03$ Posted March 7 Author Posted March 7 Sorry min udah bikin thread baru dan udah di acc CN nya
FilthyKikz Posted March 8 Posted March 8 Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one.
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