Konkong Bjirr Posted February 20 Posted February 20 (edited) Gaviramunoz_Lopez There is a teenager named Gaviramunoz Lopez, he was born into a poor family, Gavira is 18 years old, he was born on 06 2006, he has two older brothers, when Gavira was 15, he was abandoned by his mother and father in a remote town and there were many people involved in illegal work. Gavira was very scared. Gavira didn't know what to do. Gavira just sat there hungry. Gavira has no way to survive. Gavira tries to take food that is being sold on the street. Gavira takes hoddogs. Gavira is chased by many people. Gavira is very panicked and scared. She runs fast and she is almost caught by three residents who are chasing her. Gavira manages to escape and she enjoys the food she stole. She hides in a quiet place. Gavira is still thinking about what she is doing day and night. Gavira doesn't know where she wants to sleep. Gavira walked to meet the post but Gavira instead met a group of gangsters who were looking for prey to take their money. Gavira was seen by a group of gangsters. Gavira ran away and was chased. While she was running, Gavira fell and was immediately caught by a group gavira was asked for it again by a group of gangsters, but Gavira didn't have any money. Gavira was beaten until she fainted. Gavira was taken by a group of gangsters who beat her and Gavira was thrown away in a place that she didn't know. Gavira was very stressed and he was very hungry, his body was very sick and he was battered. After a long time Gavira walked Gavira met a very hidden hut and Gavira rested there and Gavira was able to rest for a while and sleep soundly. In the morning Gavira walked to look for food that she could take when Gavira was tired and she sat on the side of the road. Gavira was suddenly approached by a good person and Gavira was given money to eat. Then Gavira bought food. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: kongkong11 Account Forum yang saya miliki: Konkong Bjirr Saya Konkong Bjirr selaku pemilik account UCP kongkong11 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Gaviramunoz_Lopez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 23 by Konkong Bjirr
Nadeez Posted February 20 Posted February 20 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Konkong Bjirr Posted February 20 Author Posted February 20 1.tidak 2. 4 bulan - 6 bulan 3. Buat baru 4. tidak 5. di rumah
Nadeez Posted February 20 Posted February 20 Jawab dengan JUJUR! Apakah kamu memiliki akun UCP lain selain dari Kongkong11?
Nadeez Posted February 22 Posted February 22 Apakah dalam pembuatan character story ini kamu menggunakan bantuan dari AI?
Konkong Bjirr Posted February 23 Author Posted February 23 (edited) tidak menggunakan AI Edited February 23 by Konkong Bjirr
Nadeez Posted February 23 Posted February 23 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Konkong Bjirr, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons: Jarak spasi antar paragraf terlalu jauh, tolong diperbaiki dan berikan jarak satu spasi saja. Tolong gunakan format rata kiri-kanan agar paragraf terlihat lebih rapi. I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story. Sincerely, @Nadeez JG:RP Helper Team
Konkong Bjirr Posted February 23 Author Posted February 23 sudah saya edit coba di cek kalo ada yg salah kasih tau min
Nadeez Posted February 25 Posted February 25 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Konkong Bjirr, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Nadeez JG:RP Helper Team
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