$lostsanity$ Posted February 13 Posted February 13 UCP Name: Rian4321 Old Character: Trayell Canavas Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/365063-trayell_canavas-rian4321/#comment-3710838 New Character: Trejah_Quintero Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United States of America Reason for name change request: Ingin menjalani development baru sebagai mexican american. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC JAIL: Spoiler /myid Spoiler /MP Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Trayell Canavas, often called Tray, is a poor teeneger living alone in Los Santos, because he is an illegal immigrant from a Chihuahua, Mexico, Trayell who works as a taxi driver he has founds many connections with people on the street, and Trayell has long been friends with Seneca, a fellow immigrant from Trayell hometown, Chihuahua City, Mexico, Trayell and Seneca have long been friends and are often involved in the same criminals activities, like arms trafficking, drug trafficking. and Seneca also often helps Trayell to smuggle these stuff from Mexico, and that's why Trayell considers Seneca as a long brother. One day, Trayell was not working because last night Trayell worked all night selling some illegal stuff in various blocks in the city of Los Santos, and earned quite a lot of money, that's why Trayell chose to rest in the ordinary house where he lived and make him feels like a boss in his own life in this moment, and hours after hours Trayell feels bored because he don't wanna keeps his illegal money alone and he post his bag of money on instagram because he just wanted to make his best friends jealous about what Trayell gains tonight. But in few moment Trayell got called by Seneca because he want to meet him and after few hours Seneca already knocking on Trayell door, and Trayell with his innocent faces he just greeting his best friends, Seneca asking on Trayell brings his bag of money to somewhere because Seneca told to Trayell the DEA aready notices where the money come from, and Trayell in this moment got freeze because he don't know that gonna happens, and without thingking and only trust feeling to his best friends, Trayell lifts up his bag of money and take a drives with Seneca to somewhere. Arriving at the intended place, Trayell got confused because he saw that place like forbiden place and no one people on that building and he just realize, Seneca actually traps him and betrays him, Trayell without thingking he just run inside on that forbiden building with hopes someoone helping him, and Seneca jumps out from his sedan and he shoots Trayell in his shoulder and laps, make Trayell falling to the ground, without warning Seneca just sends more hot bullets on Trayell body while he holding bag full of money after stealing it from his own best friends, and in last breath before Trayell wanted the answers Seneca as his best friends pulls the triggers again on Trayell head Seneca leaves Trayell death body on that place. CK Screenshots: Bukti
KitoPacak Posted February 15 Posted February 15 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$lostsanity$ Posted February 15 Author Posted February 15 49 minutes ago, KitoPacak said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Iri dengki berujung kematian 5. Sudah @KitoPacak
KitoPacak Posted February 16 Posted February 16 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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