zhian Posted January 19 Posted January 19 Adriel_Patwin Adriel Patwin was known as a quiet kid who rarely talked too much. From a young age, his life was shaped by two parents with very different backgrounds, yet they complemented each other perfectly. His father was a former Marine who chose a simple life after taking early retirement. Instead of staying in the military world, Adriel’s father opened a small motorcycle repair shop on the edge of town. His hands were rough, marked with old scars, but his movements were always precise and controlled. The discipline he iscarried from his past was still strong, not in the form of shouting, but in the way he worked seriously and took responsibility for everything he did. His mother worked as a doctor at a public hospital. Her schedule was tight, and she often came home late at night, but she always tried to stay involved in Adriel’s life. From her, Adriel learned empathy, patience, and the importance of understanding people before judging them. Their house wasn’t luxurious, but it was warm enough to make Adriel feel safe. Adriel was still in school and was known as an average student not outstanding, but never causing trouble either. After school, he almost always went straight to his father’s workshop. At first, he was only told to sweep the floor or hand over tools, but over time his father began teaching him the basics. How to open an engine, recognize the sound of a problematic motorcycle, and tell the difference between original spare parts and low-quality ones. His father never taught through long lectures. He spoke briefly, then let Adriel figure things out on his own. At the workshop, Adriel found his own world. The smell of oil, the sound of engines, and the casual conversations with customers made him feel alive. He learned that every motorcycle had its own character, just like people. Some were fussy, some were stubborn, and some only needed a little attention. Patience became the key, something he practiced every day without even realizing it. At the workshop, Adriel found his own world. The smell of oil, the sound of engines, and the casual conversations with customers made him feel alive. He learned that every motorcycle had its own character, just like people. Some were fussy, some were stubborn, and some only needed a little attention. Patience became the key, something he practiced every day without even realizing it. Even though he was often seen dirty and covered in grease, Adriel never felt ashamed. He was proud to be able to help his father, no matter how small the task was. Money was never his main goal it was the feeling of being useful. His father often reminded him that skills were a lifelong asset, while his mother always emphasized the importance of education. Between those two pieces of advice, Adriel stood, trying to balance dreams and reality. Adriel Patwin wasn’t someone who talked much about the future. But from the way he worked, learned, and respected the process, it was clear that he was building his own path slowly, but steadily. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 tahun lebih URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: zhian Account Forum yang saya miliki: zhian Saya Saya zhian selaku pemilik account UCP zhian bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Adriel_Patwin) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Lixzyyyyy Posted January 19 Posted January 19 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
zhian Posted January 19 Author Posted January 19 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Saya buat character baru, sebelumnya sudah pernah buat di character lain 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Dirumah
Lixzyyyyy Posted January 20 Posted January 20 Format dibawahnya hilang, tambahin ulang. Lihat dari Character Stories milik orang lain jika kamu merasa ada yang hilang dibagian page bawah nya.
Lixzyyyyy Posted January 21 Posted January 21 Apakah kamu mempunyai account UCP yang lain selain UCP yang kamu gunakan saat ini? Mohon dijawab dengan jujur.
Lixzyyyyy Posted January 22 Posted January 22 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @zhian, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Lixzyyyyy JG:RP Helper Team
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