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[CN] Marlo_Craig to Saul_Gunnar (ishowspeed)


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UCP Name: ishowspeed

Old Character: Marlo_Craig

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Saul_Gunnar

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United State Amerca

 


Reason for name change request:

ingin mengganti character devolopmen

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

Spoiler

Marlo Craig is a former convict and also a member of BMF (Black Mafia Family) in both Los Santos and Atlanta. His path followed that of his friend and coworker, Omarion McCray, who was also a member of BMF. The two of them always carried out their work together dealing, producing drugs, using drugs, and so on. They had been closely connected since Atlanta, which eventually led them to be sent far away to Los Santos to help BMF in that area. However, Omarion suddenly went missing without any news at all, whether through BMF or through messages sent to him.

After several days, it was revealed that Omarion had been found dead during a deal that he carried out without involving Marlo. Marlo was deeply saddened and could not contain his anger toward Omarion’s killer. He was also shocked by how Omarion could have been so careless in his work that it led to his death. Marlo did not believe the rumors circulating within the West-side BMF. He tried to find out what really happened but found nothing, and he was left devastated by the senseless death of his close friend. Marlo then continued his life alone dealing, attending BMF meetings, and handling everything by himself, even though at times he wished he could be with Omarion again.

Several weeks passed, and Marlo slowly grew accustomed to being alone. Although Kamron tried to find a replacement for Marlo’s former partner, he could not find anyone who matched Marlo, since Omarion and Marlo had been known as the best workers in the West area, bringing in the highest earnings or the biggest kick-ups. Now, they were only earning half of what they used to. The impact of Omarion’s loss was severe, and soon after, Bruce Hanks also known as Juggernut was reported missing from Los Santos as well. Kamron said that Bruce Hanks had followed Marvin Rivera out of Los Santos after becoming a wanted fugitive due to shooting several people in an incident that Kamron kept secret. Marlo began to feel lost, as two people who had played important roles in his life disappeared suddenly. He tried to continue his daily activities, even without a coworker or a close friend by his side.

The day of Marlo’s death eventually arrived. After attending a BMF meeting, he received a message from a friend asking him to deliver a marijuana order. Marlo initially refused because the previous order had not yet been paid for. Josiah was the name of Marlo’s friend someone who ordered but never paid. Marlo told him that he would need to pay double, including the delivery fee. Marlo prepared everything so Josiah would not start arguing. When Marlo arrived at Josiah’s place to deliver the goods, Josiah refused to pay again, claiming he would only pay after receiving the marijuana. When Marlo said “NO,” Josiah pulled out a gun and aimed it at him. Marlo tried to run as his life was in danger, but it was futile. He was killed in the same way as Omarion dying as a result of a dealing mistake that ultimately cost him his life.

 

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
Just now, Farelalhasby said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. sudah
2. sudah
3. sudah
4. wrong dealing
5. sudah

  • $Oathkeeper$ changed the title to [CN] Marlo_Craig to Saul_Gunnar (ishowspeed)
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