ariqfadhil24 [CN] Treyvon Kareem to Trayell Canavas (Rian4321)

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UCP Name: Rian4321

Old Character: Treyvon Kareem

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/336476-treyvon_kareem-rian4321/#comment-3384847

 

 

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New Character: Trayell Canavas

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Mexican

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin mencoba development baru.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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/MYID

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/MYMP

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/OOCJAIL

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CK Story:

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Treyvon Kareem, often called Trey, is a teenager living alone in Los Santos. He lives his life haunted by a violent past. However, he is a part-time restaurant worker. He often receives overtime bonuses and loyalty bonuses from his part-time job, allowing him to rent a small room in a block in the El Corona district. Because of this, Treyvon is known among his friends in the El Corona district as a generous and kind person.

One day, Treyvon goes about his day as usual, working part-time at the El Corona restaurant. However, he suddenly receives a call from his neighbor, demanding to know the monthly rent. However, Treyvon is at work and doesn't want to be disturbed. He speaks rudely and raises his voice, unaware of his exhaustion after work, and immediately hangs up the phone.

After Treyvon finished his work, he immediately fell asleep and forgot about the previous incident, but suddenly Treyvon received another call from his neighbor, then he immediately woke up and it turned out that his neighbor was already in front of the small room that Treyvon was occupying, and his neighbor wanted to accompany him to buy fruit at the minimarket, and without thinking Treyvon followed him because he was still sleepy and forgot about the previous incident.

Arriving at the intended place, Treyvon found it not in front of a minimarket but in an empty field with a shack and no one passing by at all, and Treyvon suddenly felt the muzzle of a cold long barrel pointed at his shoulder, Treyvon who was still sleepy without thinking he ran into the shack intending to look for someone's help, but what he found was no one in the shack, then Treyvon's neighbor came towards Treyvon and with a feeling of hurt his neighbor shot Treyvon right in the chest, Treyvon could only lie down and hold his chest which was already flowing a lot of blood and pain, he lay in the empty house and lost blood then he died.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[$lostsanity$]

6 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Sudah
2. Sudah
3. Sudah
4. Sakit hati berujung dengan kematian.
5. Sudah

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Screenshot OOC Jail dan /mp di pisah

[$lostsanity$]

2 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Screenshot OOC Jail dan /mp di pisah

Sudah di perbaiki min, mohon di check kembali, terimakasih 

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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.