$ellltp$ Posted October 7, 2025 Posted October 7, 2025 UCP Name: maelleeorii20 Old Character: Dominic_Zenith Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/294230-dominic_zenith-maelleeorii20/ New Character: Hiro_Anderson Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: USA Reason for name change request: Ingin menganti alur cerita dan membersihkan Crime Record. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC JAIL. Spoiler /myid Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Dominic Zenith always stayed out of the limelight. He just went about his business, got things handled, and did not bother with fanfare. Folks labeled him a courier or a fixer or even a runner sometimes. He never really cared about that stuff. To him words were empty. The real point was delivering on a job once he signed up for it. Nothing more complicated. So Emmanuel Munoz passing along this final assignment a bag to leave at a warehouse beyond the city limits did not raise any flags for Dominic. He'd run that route plenty of times before. Yet something seemed off about the whole thing. Like a song lagging just behind the rhythm. Could have been Munoz tone of voice. Or maybe Dominic sensed deep inside that this path was heading nowhere positive. He convinced himself it was over after this. One more gig. Then a simple existence away from all the dark deals and obligations. He pulled onto the final road. The atmosphere hung heavy and unmoving. Not peaceful exactly. More like frozen in place. No breeze stirred. No noises broke through. Even the far off traffic drone had vanished. He stopped the car and shut it down. Paused there for a bit. Double checked the location details. It lined up perfect. With a heavy breath he snatched the bag and got out. The air carried that heavy mix of rust and wet stone. As if the building had been sealed up for ages without fresh air. Then motion caught his eye. Out from the shadows a shape stepped forward. The guy looked young. Plain features overall. But that smile it twisted things wrong. Dominic knew in an instant. His instincts screamed trouble. He started to go for the pistol at his hip. Too late though. The bullet hit first. Fire tore into his leg and he crumpled. The pavement slammed up to meet him. Somehow his hand clamped down on the bag. Habit I guess. Or pure reflex. He couldn't say why he held on so tight. The young one darted in quick. Way too quick for normal. Snatched the bag and vanished before Dominic could react. His weapon never even cleared the holster. Stretched out on the ground with breaths coming ragged and short Dominic gazed up at the dim overhead. Hoping for some kind of sign maybe. Nothing showed. Blood spread out around him. The pain sharpened with every second. Thoughts raced. Had Munoz set this up on purpose. Or had he simply lost interest in keeping Dominic alive. The quiet closed back in. Thicker now. Like everything else had already forgotten him and kept going. No dramatic finish. No clever farewell. Just the chill of the floor. Dimming vision. And the hard fact that years of scraping by in the shadows had cost him everything in the end. That's how it wrapped up for him. CK Screenshots: Bukti Spoiler
boopeace Posted October 8, 2025 Posted October 8, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$ellltp$ Posted October 8, 2025 Author Posted October 8, 2025 16 minutes ago, boopeace said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah. 2. Sudah. 3. Sudah. 4. Melawan perampok yang menjebaknya. 5.Sudah.
boopeace Posted October 9, 2025 Posted October 9, 2025 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ change your name.
Ooxy Posted October 11, 2025 Posted October 11, 2025 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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