pending Corbin_Walles [Asepyul]

[asepyul]

Corbin_Walles

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          Corbin Walles was born in Texas on 5th January 1990. He was born to a wealthy family that ran the biggest workshop in Texas. When he was 15 he was as skilled as any pro mechanic in the town. He was famous for his quick and detailed work on heavy machinery. He can repair almost every type of land vehicle at a young age. But after he is 19, he is forced to go to college by his family to prepare him for a management role in the workshop. However, he loves to work with his hands and is very proud of it. Because of that, Corbin decides to go to another city despite his mom begging him to stay.

 

          Not long after that, Corbin ended up in Los Santos and started doing what he does best, mechanic work at the Mechanic Center in Ocean Dock. At first, he got no customers because he was young and looked inexperienced. Day by day, he still waits and works as much and is as honest as he can, which other mechanics start to notice and try to sabotage his work because his services grow too fast and other mechanics feel envy at his success.

 

          Then, after a year working there, he met Ione Khofflyng, the senior mechanic at Mechanic Desert. Ione takes Corbin under his wing and protects Corbin from mechanics that try to ruin his career. Because the working environment in Mechanic Center is growing toxic to Corbin, Ione decides to take him to Mechanic Desert to help him as his assistant. He worked as Ione's assistant for a long time. Ten years passed, and Corbin and Ione's relationship grew tighter. He considered Ione his father figure. However, when Corbin was in his 30s, Ione suddenly passed away from a fishing accident. Ione's boat exploded while he was in the middle of the ocean at night. Before Ione tragically passed away, he had already trusted Corbin with all of his assets; car, apartment, and all of Ione's expensive tools.

 

          Now Corbin continues Ione's legacy in Mechanic Desert and sometimes calls his parents and always goes back home to Texas every Thanksgiving to try to get close to his parents, because now he knows how it feels to lose his loved one.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange: Force CN (Ooxy)

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Asepyul

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Asepyul

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Saya asepyul selaku pemilik account UCP Asepyul bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Corbin_Walles) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited September 25, 2025 by asepyul

[ZulRizki]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[asepyul]

1. Tidak

2. 4 - 6 Bulan

3. Namechange

4. Tidak

5. Tidak

6. Rumah

[ZulRizki]

Mohon dijawab pertanyaan ini dengan JUJUR

1. Apakah Charater Story yang dibuat dengan bantuan AI?

2. Apakah Format Character Story sudah disesuaikan dengan ketentuan?

3. Apakah kamu membuat Character ini dengan pemikiran sendiri atau dibantu oleh orang lain?

4. Apakah kamu yakin hanya memiliki UCP ini saja?

[asepyul]

11 minutes ago, ZulRizki said:

Mohon dijawab pertanyaan ini dengan JUJUR

1. Apakah Charater Story yang dibuat dengan bantuan AI?

2. Apakah Format Character Story sudah disesuaikan dengan ketentuan?

3. Apakah kamu membuat Character ini dengan pemikiran sendiri atau dibantu oleh orang lain?

4. Apakah kamu yakin hanya memiliki UCP ini saja?

 

1. Grammar checking ya, pembuatan tidak

2. Ya

3. Tidak

4. Ya

[ZulRizki]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @asepyul

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@ZulRizki
JG:RP Helper Team