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[CN] Tristan Matunaagd to Carlo Neilsen (Elbern1)


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UCP Name: Elbern1

Old Character: Tristan Matunaagd

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Carlo Neilsen

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: San Francisco, USA

 


Reason for name change request:

Pengubahan Roleplay

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail :

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/myid :

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CK Story:

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One day in the middle of the night, filled with despair, Tristan lived alone after leaving his village to seek his fortune elsewhere. Relying only on the leftover food he brought from his hometown and his dwindling money, Tristan thought hard about how he could get capital for himself in a place far from his family. Visiting several plantations or farms on the outskirts of the village, hoping he would get a job there, but no place would hire him. A few days later, Tristan became increasingly desperate. He didn't know what to do. One day, he received a phone call from his relative, “the fence.”, the guy told Tristan to come to where he was in the desert town of Fort Carson.
Long story short, when Tristan arrived there, he approached his friend with a blank face, without his usual fiery spirit. Seeing Tristan like that, his friends knew that something was wrong with Tristan, he immediately asked Tristan what was going on, and a long conversation ensued between Tristan and his friend. After Tristan spent several hours telling his friend about everything that was happening, his friend immediately gave Tristan a job, it wasn't a good job, but given Tristan need for capital, he took it anyway. Stealing anything, yes... that was the job offered by his friend, considering that Tristan's friend was a fence for stolen goods, so the job offered was in line with his friend's background.
On his first day of work with his friend, Tristan stole rare car parts from a large warehouse owned by a company directly supervised by the local government. However, Tristan and his friend's attempt to steal the spare parts was successful, without a single obstacle. After a few weeks of doing this work, Tristan felt he had gained enough experience to know how to make money from such activities. Ultimately, Tristan decided to go solo in carrying out these actions. Tristan carried out his actions successfully and ended up earning a lot of money. One night, while walking on the outskirts of the village, Tristan saw a motorcycle parked without its owner watching it. The thought of stealing it immediately popped into Tristan's mind, and he immediately carried out the action without thinking twice. It only took him 3 minutes to break the motorcycle's lock, but unfortunately, Tristan was caught by the motorcycle's owner. A tense chase ensued, until Tristan was cornered and surrounded by the motorcycle owner and his friends.
But instead of protecting himself, Tristan shot one of the group members, resulting in a shootout between Tristan and the group. Tristan managed to flee the scene, but the group continued to pursue him. Eventually, Tristan, who was riding a stolen motorcycle, was hit by a car used by the group to chase him. Tristan was left lying on the road and was then forcibly taken to a secluded location, where the group shot him in the chest, ultimately killing him.

 

CK Screenshots:

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  • $yippy$ changed the title to [CN] Tristan Matunaagd to Carlo Neilsen (Elbern1)
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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
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10 minutes ago, newlyzer said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Sudah
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Sudah
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Mati terbunuh
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? Sudah
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