thefallen Posted August 8, 2025 Posted August 8, 2025 Marquez_Bernal Marquez Bernal was born back in ‘04, in this beat-up little spot in El Corona, Los Santos. Place was falling apart, but that was home. Out here, you couldn’t shut the world out even if you tried — bass from somebody’s speakers a block away, folks arguing on the sidewalk, cars tearing past like they were running from something, and sirens cutting through the night like a blade. His pops, Arturo, kept a garage running… barely. Most weeks it was just enough to keep food on the table. His mom, Leticia, worked her hands raw cleaning rooms at this busted motel off the freeway. She’d come home late, eyes heavy, smelling like bleach, but still pushing through. Growing up, Marquez stayed close to his big brother, Omarion. That was his shield — the one who made sure nobody messed with him. But Omarion was knee-deep in the streets, and everyone knew it. Then one day, the cops snatched him up on a gun charge. Just like that, he was gone, and Marquez knew… the streets had their grip on his family, whether he liked it or not. With Omarion locked up, Marquez started hanging outside more, walking the same blocks his brother used to run. It started small — drop this off, tell so-and-so this message, keep watch on the corner. Nothing crazy… but you learn quick out here. You learn when to talk, when to shut your mouth, and when to ghost before the wrong crowd notices you. When Omarion came home, he made noise fast. Let everybody know the clique, Down as Fuck, wasn’t dead. Walls all over El Corona started lighting up with their name in fat letters. Those tags weren’t for show — they were a statement. Now Marquez is twenty-one. Ain’t just “Omarion’s little bro” anymore. He runs with Rafael Vertigo, Emmanuel Pinon, Samuel Lobos, and Lautaro Ochoa, pushing the clique under Evil Gang 13. People see him as the quiet one — the guy who’s always thinking three steps ahead, never moving unless he knows exactly how to walk away clean. Outside the gang, he messes with electronics. Fixes old TVs, busted radios, whatever people bring him. Sometimes they pay, sometimes they hand over junk he flips for a little cash. It’s not big money, but it’s his, and it keeps him from having to hustle for every dollar. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: goditarmagedon, gotthefeather Account Forum yang saya miliki: thefallen Saya thefallen selaku pemilik account UCP goditarmagedon bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Marquez_Bernal) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
KennyHardian Posted August 8, 2025 Posted August 8, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
thefallen Posted August 8, 2025 Author Posted August 8, 2025 34 minutes ago, KennyHardian said: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) - Tidak - 1 tahun - buat baru - ya (gotthefeather) - tidak - di rumah
KennyHardian Posted August 10, 2025 Posted August 10, 2025 On 8/8/2025 at 12:28 PM, thefallen said: - Tidak - 1 tahun - buat baru - ya (gotthefeather) - tidak - di rumah Apakah kamu bersedia bila akun UCP duplikatmu diblock?
thefallen Posted August 11, 2025 Author Posted August 11, 2025 12 hours ago, KennyHardian said: Apakah kamu bersedia bila akun UCP duplikatmu diblock? yang gotthefeather? bersedia, karena sudah tidak saya gunakan lagi
KennyHardian Posted August 11, 2025 Posted August 11, 2025 on review, mohon ditunggu 11/8 - Blocked UCP : gotthefeather
KennyHardian Posted August 11, 2025 Posted August 11, 2025 Apakah kamu yakin tidak ada bantuan dari AI dalam pembuatan story diatas? @thefallen
thefallen Posted August 11, 2025 Author Posted August 11, 2025 7 hours ago, KennyHardian said: Apakah kamu yakin tidak ada bantuan dari AI dalam pembuatan story diatas? yakin
KennyHardian Posted August 13, 2025 Posted August 13, 2025 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @thefallen, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @KennyHardian JG:RP Helper Team
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