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[CN] Jeshiah_Becker to Raven_Asher (Beer11)


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UCP Name: Beer11

Old Character: Jeshiah_Becker

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Raven_Asher

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: USA

 


Reason for name change request:

ingin menganti character development.

 

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CK Story:

Spoiler

Jeshiah Becker or simply Beck, as he was commonly known among his friends—was a kind-hearted young man who often attended church to pray. He lived alone with his father, as his mother had passed away five years earlier. Being an only child, Beck relied solely on his father, who worked hard to support them. Though his father had a stable office job, it was far from easy he often worked late into the night.

One day, Beck’s father was hospitalized after being diagnosed with kidney disease. Devastated by the news, Beck took on extra work to help cover his father’s medical expenses. Since then, he, too, had been coming home late every night. Still, no matter how exhausted he was, Beck made sure to visit his father every morning—but not before stopping by the church to pray. That Saturday, Beck woke up later than usual. Normally, he would rise before 7 AM, but today, it was already past seven. Rushing to get ready, he hurried to the church to pray before heading to the hospital. However, as he arrived, an uneasy feeling settled over him. He tried not to dwell on it, focusing instead on his prayers before leaving for the hospital.

After finishing his prayers, Beck quickly got on his motorcycle and sped toward the hospital. But as he passed under a secluded bridge, a thief suddenly blocked his path, pointing a gun at him. Startled, Beck swerved to avoid the robber. The thief, shocked that Beck didn’t stop, instinctively fired four shots at him. Beck lost control of his bike and collapsed onto the road. The robber then pressed the gun against Beck’s head, demanding his valuables. Instead of complying, Beck defiantly threw his jewelry off the bridge. As the thief watched in disbelief, Beck flashed him a faint smile. Enraged, the thief pulled the trigger one last time—right into Beck’s head. By the end of the ordeal, Beck had suffered five gunshot wounds: one to the head and four to his body.

 

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
7 jam yang lalu, DaffaRexandro said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. sudah

2. sudah

3. sudah

4.perampokan dan di bunuh

5. sudah

  • $BADRIIII$ changed the title to [CN] Jeshiah_Becker to Darren_Norris (Beer11)
  • $BADRIIII$ changed the title to [CN] Jeshiah_Becker to Raven_Asher (Beer11)
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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.

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