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[CN] Louys Mihr to Clifford Choppy (dimasputras)


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UCP Name: dimasputras

Old Character: Louys Mihr

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Clifford Choppy

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Amerika

 


Reason for name change request:

ingin menciptakan Roleplay yang baru dengan character yang baru dan develpoment yang baru

 

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CK Story:

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   One day a Louys Mihr had a problem with his own work, namely the Lernazor Crew, Lernazor was on the horns of destruction. Because of many conflicts with other mafia business issues, and many of his crews left him and even disappeared, Louys Mihr did not hesitate to think of a cunning way to sell all of Lernazor's illegal goods for his needs and avoid losses to himself, at one point Louys Mihr remembered his old business partner, Wayne Titterington is a leader of a motorcycle club. He has known Louys Mihr for a long time. His motorcycle club always does business with the Lernazor Crew. At that time, Louys Mihr immediately called Wayne and talked about how each of them was doing because so far there had been very little business with him.

 

   Louys Mihr immediately offered the goods he would sell to Wayne, a total of two thousand cocaine that he would offer, Louys would also give it 50% below the market price, Wayne was surprised why Louys, a businessman and a person with a cunning character, dared to sell that much cocaine at half the market price, Wayne also had an idea to be cunning to Louys when he heard that he would bring two thousand cocaine, without thinking twice Wayne gave his location to Wayne, Wayne Titterington told Louys to bring the goods to him, Louys brought the cocaine and kept it in his motorbike bag.

 

   After arriving at Wayne's place, they chatted a little about their respective jobs. Louys asked about the Motorcycle Club run by Wayne, his Motorcycle Club seemed to be getting stronger and stronger, then Wayne asked about the Lernazor Crew, Louys replied that Lernazor was on the verge of being destroyed, due to too many conflicts in the business, and the crews were missing who knows where, there was no news, even Barkev, Louys' right hand man, disappeared who knows where, Lernazor seemed to be built by Louys alone.

 

   Seeing Louys himself carrying the goods he wanted to sell, Wayne also had a rotten and evil idea, he had hidden his gun behind his body with that Wayne immediately pointed his gun at Louys and intended to finish him off on the spot, Louys was shocked after Wayne pointed a gun at him, he asked why he pointed a gun at him, Wayne who was actually fed up with Louys's cunning behavior in business, now Wayne wanted to reverse the cunning, Louys's leg was shot by Wayne until Louys groaned in pain, Louys immediately offered more goods so he could be saved, but Wayne could not believe Louys's cunning words anymore, in the end Wayne Titteringtong shot at Louys Mihr, after Louys died Wayne immediately rushed to take his goods and then left the place.

 

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
10 jam yang lalu, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Ya Jumlah Story saya memiliki 464 kata yang terbagi menjadi 4 paragraf

2. Sudah, jumlah ss saya melebihi dari ketentuan yang tertera yaitu 10

3. Ya

4. Kelicikan, Penghianatan Partner bisnis lama.

5. Ya Sudah

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