ariqfadhil24 [CN] Angel Carillo to Kamron Wright (JamesRobert)

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UCP Name: JamesRobert

Old Character: Angel Carillo

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/320665-angel_carillo-jamesrobert/

 

 

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New Character: Kamron Wright

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 

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Reason for name change request:

Karakter sudah menempuh akhir cerita dan ingin memulai RP di tempat wadah baru/FnG

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

Bukti SS OOC Jail

 

/myid

 

/mp

 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

   Angel Carillo, a man that live his own life to help his family. He goes to the city, leaving his family back in Angelpine to find a stable job that could help his family and relatives, living with a lot of sibling is already tiring enough for Angel and his other working relatives to help the family out. But the city is not what he thinks it is. To live he does any job that he could take even though there is a risk of getting incarcerated by the police but he will do it, although not all the time, he manages to cope with himself to do it. Through his hard working ethics in the city he manage to create some sort of connection that could help him live day by day. After a year gone by Angel got called by his mother telling about their situation back home, and Angel got no choice but he have to find a quick job that pays handsomely, so he tries to get in touch with a friend of his.

   A tip comes right from his friend that theres an easy job where he could give a bad touch to a company that are seems going to bloom and make the other competitor outright loses the competition. Hearing that, he manages to get some phones that he keeps to gives a review on the internet anonymously that might ruins the sponsor that tries to reaching for that same company. Angel cluelessly jumps right into his own dug grave, he is being followed by some unknown guy that’ll end his life. Met in some bar that he is working on, he took a late night shift to keep his balance of money in check. Little did he know, the killer that was sent to kill him came by.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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5 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

1. Sudah
2. Sudah (11 foto)
3. Sudah
4. Pekerjaan mudah dan cepat, namun mendapatkan timbal balik yang lebih buruk (Dibunuh karena mengancam kredibilitas perusahaan)
5. sudah

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Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
2. Cari nama yang lain yah, nama "Darius Saint" famouse name, bisa cek "Here".

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22 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

• Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
• Cari nama yang lain yah, nama "Darius Saint" famouse name, bisa cek "Here".

Point satu sudah diganti menjadi 305 kata dan 2 paragraf
Point dua sudah diganti menjadi Kamron Wright

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Sebelum /autocn pastikan mengecek terlebih dahulu, jika sudah benar silahkan /autocn.

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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.