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Davis_Ray


 

     On January 22, 1999, a child named Davis Ray was born in Los Angeles, California, United States. His mother was named Lauren Michelle, and his father was named William Raymond. His mother was an ordinary housewife, while his father had a black business. His father sold various illegal goods, such as drugs, marijuana, and many weapons.

 

     Davis was a very lazy and disorganized person. He often opposed his parents. In junior high school, Davis was also known as a very naughty person. While at school, Davis often did negative things such as bullying friends, destroying school facilities (vandalism), and many other violations. Because of the many violations committed by Davis at school, he was expelled from school. His parents were very disappointed in Davis at that time, especially his mother.

 

     After being expelled from school, Davis's activities were only going out late at night with his friends and then coming home early. 3 weeks later his house was targeted by gangsters because of unhealthy business competition. Unfortunately, his father's life could not be saved because he was shot in the chest and head, his mother survived because she escaped through the back door and only suffered minor injuries. Davis who heard the news from his neighbor was rebuilt but it was too late, everything had happened, he lost his father. 1 years after the incident, he continued his father's illegal business and recruited several members to become his partners in running the illegal business. Time continued to pass, until finally his illegal business grew rapidly and controlled most of the city. In silence, he harbored a deep revenge for the death of his father who was shot by a group of unknown gangsters. When night fell, he began his action. In a matter of hours, he managed to kill all the gangster members.

 

 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Davis07

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Davinputra07


 

Saya davinputra07 selaku pemilik account UCP Davis07 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Davis_Ray) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited by davinputra07
karena cerita kurang dari 300 karakter, dan ada kesalahan di bagian questions
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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

    edit.png

     

 

Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan ada beberapa hal yang harus anda jawab, pastikan anda menjawab dengan JUJUR.  
 

  1. Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu miliki.
  2. Apakah character story kamu sudah memenuhi ketentuan 300 kata?
  3. Tolong jawab dengan JUJUR poin 3 dan 4 karena ini berpengaruh pada character story kamu. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu?
  4. Apakah kamu mencontek Character Story milik orang lain dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu
Posted
3 minutes ago, Wawanharley said:

Sebelum melanjutkan ada beberapa hal yang harus anda jawab, pastikan anda menjawab dengan JUJUR.  
 

  1. Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu miliki.
  2. Apakah character story kamu sudah memenuhi ketentuan 300 kata?
  3. Tolong jawab dengan JUJUR poin 3 dan 4 karena ini berpengaruh pada character story kamu. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu?
  4. Apakah kamu mencontek Character Story milik orang lain dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu

1. Saya hanya memiliki UCP ini yaitu Davis07. 

2. Setelah saya crosscheck sepertinya sudah, jika belum memenuhi saya akan merevisi lagi. 

3. Tidak, saya tidak menggunakan bantuan AI

4. Tentu saja tidak. 

Posted
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @davinputra07,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Wawanharley
JG:RP Helper Team

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