atreides Posted May 14, 2025 Posted May 14, 2025 (edited) Darby Weston was born on March 8, 1993. Darby was born into a family that strongly adhered to white supremacist ideology, a Neo-Nazism family. He had blue eyes and white skin, always sporting a bald hairstyle and wearing oversized clothes. Darby lived in a predominantly white neighborhood, and young Darby was always taught to hate the black children around him. Darby behaved as a bully in his neighborhood, and this was ingrained in his soul until he was a teenager. One day, Darby's parents divorced. Darby began searching for his identity, losing his way and associating with a bad crowd. One day, Darby committed a robbery at a store to meet his daily needs. Darby failed in his attempt and was sentenced to 10 years in prison. In prison, he was adopted by a white nationalist gang, the Aryan Brotherhood. Conflicts between the Aryans and black gangs in prison were not uncommon. Darby's character began to form, becoming cruel, strong, and intelligent. Because of this, the white supremacist ideology within Darby developed in his soul, and he always increased his loyalty to the Aryans. He did not hesitate to let his hands be dirtied by anyone who crossed Neo-Nazism. 10 years passed, and Darby set foot outside of prison again. Darby began engaging in criminal activities with his Aryan members, such as drug dealing, firearms sales, and other criminal activities. At the peak of Darby's success, he experienced failure for the second time, and the police successfully apprehended Darby and put him in a cell. Darby kept thinking about how to free himself from police interference with his business. He told the Aryans, and eventually, Darby decided to go to the city of Los Santos. After Darby was released from his sentence, he flew from his city to Los Santos. Finally, Darby started from scratch and tried to develop his business in Los Santos while still holding firmly to his white supremacist ideology. He made sure that nothing could hinder his business this time. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: atreides Account Forum yang saya miliki: Atreides Saya Atreides selaku pemilik account UCP atreides bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Darby_Weston) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 18, 2025 by atreides
mvnko14 Posted May 14, 2025 Posted May 14, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
atreides Posted May 14, 2025 Author Posted May 14, 2025 (edited) 1. Ya 2. Kurang dari 1 bulan 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah Edited May 14, 2025 by atreides
mvnko14 Posted May 14, 2025 Posted May 14, 2025 Buat menjadi 3 paragraf. CS di atas tidak menceritakan bahwa pada akhirnya karakter kamu menetap/tinggal di Los Santos dan sekitarnya. Perbaiki lagi. Mana bagian "Questions" dan catatan kaki CS nya? Kamu perbaiki lagi.
atreides Posted May 14, 2025 Author Posted May 14, 2025 Darby Weston was born on March 8, 1993. Darby was born into a family that strongly adhered to white supremacist ideology, a Neo-Nazism family. He had blue eyes and white skin, always sporting a bald hairstyle and wearing oversized clothes. Darby lived in a predominantly white neighborhood, and young Darby was always taught to hate the black children around him. Darby behaved as a bully in his neighborhood, and this was ingrained in his soul until he was a teenager. One day, Darby's parents divorced. Darby began searching for his identity, losing his way and associating with a bad crowd. One day, Darby committed a robbery at a store to meet his daily needs. Darby failed in his attempt and was sentenced to 10 years in prison. In prison, he was adopted by a white nationalist gang, the Aryan Brotherhood. Conflicts between the Aryans and black gangs in prison were not uncommon. Darby's character began to form, becoming cruel, strong, and intelligent. Because of this, the white supremacist ideology within Darby developed in his soul, and he always increased his loyalty to the Aryans. He did not hesitate to let his hands be dirtied by anyone who crossed Neo-Nazism. 10 years passed, and Darby set foot outside of prison again. Darby began engaging in criminal activities with his Aryan members, such as drug dealing, firearms sales, and other criminal activities. At the peak of Darby's success, he experienced failure for the second time, and the police successfully apprehended Darby and put him in a cell. Darby kept thinking about how to free himself from police interference with his business. He told the Aryans, and eventually, Darby decided to go to the city of Los Santos. After Darby was released from his sentence, he flew from his city to Los Santos. Finally, Darby started from scratch and tried to develop his business in Los Santos while still holding firmly to his white supremacist ideology. He made sure that nothing could hinder his business this time.
atreides Posted May 14, 2025 Author Posted May 14, 2025 Darby Weston was born on March 8, 1993. Darby was born into a family that strongly adhered to white supremacist ideology, a Neo-Nazism family. He had blue eyes and white skin, always sporting a bald hairstyle and wearing oversized clothes. Darby lived in a predominantly white neighborhood, and young Darby was always taught to hate the black children around him. Darby behaved as a bully in his neighborhood, and this was ingrained in his soul until he was a teenager. One day, Darby's parents divorced. Darby began searching for his identity, losing his way and associating with a bad crowd. One day, Darby committed a robbery at a store to meet his daily needs. Darby failed in his attempt and was sentenced to 10 years in prison. In prison, he was adopted by a white nationalist gang, the Aryan Brotherhood. Conflicts between the Aryans and black gangs in prison were not uncommon. Darby's character began to form, becoming cruel, strong, and intelligent. Because of this, the white supremacist ideology within Darby developed in his soul, and he always increased his loyalty to the Aryans. He did not hesitate to let his hands be dirtied by anyone who crossed Neo-Nazism. 10 years passed, and Darby set foot outside of prison again. Darby began engaging in criminal activities with his Aryan members, such as drug dealing, firearms sales, and other criminal activities. At the peak of Darby's success, he experienced failure for the second time, and the police successfully apprehended Darby and put him in a cell. Darby kept thinking about how to free himself from police interference with his business. He told the Aryans, and eventually, Darby decided to go to the city of Los Santos. After Darby was released from his sentence, he flew from his city to Los Santos. Finally, Darby started from scratch and tried to develop his business in Los Santos while still holding firmly to his white supremacist ideology. He made sure that nothing could hinder his business this time. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: atreides Account Forum yang saya miliki: Atreides Saya Atreides selaku pemilik account UCP atreides bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Darby_Weston) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
mvnko14 Posted May 18, 2025 Posted May 18, 2025 Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas.
mvnko14 Posted May 19, 2025 Posted May 19, 2025 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @atreides, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @mvnko14 JG:RP Helper Team
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