$Akbar_Saputra$ Posted March 21, 2025 Posted March 21, 2025 UCP Name: AkbarSaputra Old Character: Jose_Alston Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/318944-jose_alston-akbarsaputra/#comment-3182597 New Character: Salvatrucha_Lutalo Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: California, USA Reason for name change request: Ingin memulai roleplay yang baru. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti /Mp Spoiler My ID Spoiler OOC Jail Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler In the morning, Jose Alston woke up from his sleep because it was time to work as an introduction to cargo from Los Santos out of town to meet his needs. When he woke up from his sleep, Jose walked to the living room to think of a life that was always like this. When Jose finished thinking about Jose's life walking towards the refrigerator and took a beer bottle to drink in the guest room. When I finished drinking it, Jose walked outside to see the vehicle, Glandale to start his work. Before Jose went to the Introduction to Cargo Jose immediately checked the condition of the engine to ensure safety while working. When Jose checked the Glandale vehicle, Jose was very impressed because he saw his engine that resembled Fast & Furious films even though Jose modified it alone in his yard. When Jose finish checked the condition of his engine, Jose left Blueberry to the city of Vinewood to buy a burger and order his favorite drink. And Jose was also served very well by employees who were in Vinewood by giving him a discount that made him happy. When Jose finished ordering food and drinks that Jose liked, Jose went towards Mullholand Intersection to go to his work, namely delivering cargo. When in the middle of the road, Jose was approached by a sadler car and immediately prevented his vehicle from running away, but Sadler drivers came down and pointed Dessert Eagle weapons to Jose and committed the murder. Jose experienced a pretty severe bleeding in the chest due to the shot that hit Heart, and Jose was declared dead at the scene. When Jose died while in Los Santos, the family was very sad for the death of the first child who was always proud of by everyone. And many of Jose's best friends came to his funeral because they felt disappointed because Jose's fate had to end like a murder committed by his own family, the perpetrator of Jose's murder has not been found because his family has not admitted who committed an act like murder. CK Screenshots: Bukti Spoiler
$Sobersanta$ Posted March 21, 2025 Posted March 21, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$Akbar_Saputra$ Posted March 21, 2025 Author Posted March 21, 2025 1. Sudah sesuai 2. Sudah sesuai 3. Benar 4. Ditembak saudara kandung. 5. Sudah
$Sobersanta$ Posted March 22, 2025 Posted March 22, 2025 Pending, berikut beberapa point pending Screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid diberi tanda di atas screenshot.
$Akbar_Saputra$ Posted March 22, 2025 Author Posted March 22, 2025 Sudah saya perbaiki, makasih atas saran nya mas @Ariqfadhil24
$Akbar_Saputra$ Posted March 22, 2025 Author Posted March 22, 2025 Sudah mas, maaf saya kelupaan @Ariqfadhil24
$Sobersanta$ Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 Oh iya itu CK story kurang dari 300 kata, tambahkan minimal 300 kata.
$Akbar_Saputra$ Posted March 23, 2025 Author Posted March 23, 2025 Sudah saya tambahkan mas @Ariqfadhil24, semoga tidak ada kesalahanan lagi...terima kasih karena sudah memberitahu saya...
$Sobersanta$ Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
brainfreeze52 Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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