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[CN] Milo_Versace to Velvichenzo Albertachio (Aryshaa)


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UCP Name: Aryshaa

Old Character: Milo_Versace

Old Character Story:

 


New Character: Velvichenzo Albertachio

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United State America

 


Reason for name change request:

Chaning the char development, from before that always hard working and making money to a bit crime, or some gang and FnG roleplay.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail
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CK Story:

Spoiler

As the morning sun raises, Milo feel a bit tired as he wake up on his bed, With a sleepy eyes he walks to the bathroom to take a shower and go work as he do every day. After taking a long bath he change his shirt to the workshirt causes he work as builder at Los Santos City, And then he walk to his car and trying to start the engine. When the engine starts Milo start driving his car to the work place, A few minutes later he arrive and get out of his car then walk to the office. Milo starting to work with these paper on his office that located at near Mulholland-Richman houses. He do it with neatly and carefully.

A few hours of job he got an break and walk to the nearest restaurant, after fill his stomach with fullness he back to the office and continue working, At 8 oc'clock he goes back to his car and driving back carefully, On the road he feel something different and feeling uneasy with his head but he doesnt care with that think. A few minutes later he arrived at his apartement, Before goes inside, he park his car outside and get out from his car and lock it from outside after that. He walk to his flat feeling tiredly after work, When he is stand infront of his door, he took a key from his pocket and open the apartement door, He walk inside and place his bag on the floor as he sit on the couch and taking breath heavily. Half an our passed while Milo just sit down tiredly and someone knocking the door, As Milo tell him to enter the apartement. As the guy walk inside, Milo realized that was his old customer that he lied in the past that named Jared Lagoona, Milo doesnt know how that guy know his address, Milo tell him to sit down and start a conversation with that guy, not long after that, the guy anger rose to Milo. When that guy stand and pull out his shotgun from his back, Milo try to run from him but he got hited by the gun on his leg that make him fall to the ground, noting last long after the first shoot, The guy hit Milo arms with hot bullets. When he screamed in pain, That guy aimed his gun to Milo head and pull the triger that make Milo instanly lifeless as the blood spots scattered everywhere, After that, the crazy man pretended not to know and walked out of the apartment.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted

1. Sudah.

2. Sudah.

3. Sudah.

4. Pembunuhan, yang disebabkan penipuan.

5. Sudah.

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