ariqfadhil24 [CN] Paul Marchesi to Trenton Blackwood (Brick)

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UCP Name: Brick

Old Character: Paul Marchesi

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/293949-paul_marchesi-brick/

 

 

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New Character: Trenton Blackwood

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin menjalankan roleplay yang lebih santai dengan awal yang baru.

 

Screenshots of OOC Jail, /myid, and /mp:

Bukti

 

OOC Jail

 

/mp

 

/myid

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Paul Marchesi stepped into Lil’ Probe Inn, seeking nothing more than a stiff drink after a grueling day. The place was dimly lit, the smell of old wood and cheap whiskey hanging in the air. As he took a seat at the bar and sipped his whiskey, he barely noticed the heavy footsteps approaching. A man with a scarred face and cold eyes slid onto the stool beside him, staring daggers. “That your bike out front?” the stranger muttered. Paul glanced at him, unfazed. “Yeah, what of it?” The man scoffed. “I don’t like where you parked it.” Paul smirked, shaking his head. “That’s not my problem.” The next thing he knew, the guy shoved him. Paul sighed—looks like this was going outside.

The fight was quick and ugly. Fists flew, knuckles cracked, and within moments, Paul was standing over the stranger’s unconscious body, sprawled out against the side of the bar. Wiping the blood off his lip, he turned away, straddled his bike, and roared off into the night. The cool wind cut through the heat of the fight, and after a few miles, Paul pulled into a small convenience store. He grabbed a cold Coke, twisted the cap off, and took a deep swig, letting the carbonation settle him down. Stepping outside, he exhaled deeply—until he saw him.

The same man from the bar stood under the flickering streetlight, his stance rigid, his eyes burning with something darker than rage. But this time, he wasn’t empty-handed. A sawn-off shotgun gleamed in his grip. Paul barely had time to process before the stranger raised it. “You shouldn’t have done that,” the man growled. The last thing Paul heard was the deafening blast. His body hit the pavement, Coke spilling across the asphalt as the glass bottle rolled into the gutter. The street went quiet again, leaving nothing but the hum of a neon sign and the slow retreating footsteps of the man who got the last word.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?

Ans: Sudah.

2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?

Ans: Sudah.

3.Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?

Ans: Ya.

4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?

Ans: Pembunuhan atas pembalasan dendam.

Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

Ans: Sudah.

 

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Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Upload ulang keseluruhan screenshot karena tidak terbaca, gunakan imgur.

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Done ya, sudah menggunakan imgur

 

@Ariqfadhil24

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Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

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Changename on process

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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.