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[CN] Shadrias Brooks to Keywon Wallace (JeruxLmao)


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UCP Name: JeruxLmao

Old Character: Shadrias Brooks

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Keywon Wallace

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

Ingin mengganti alur cerita roleplay.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail

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/myid

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/mp

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CK Story:

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Shadrias Brooks is a young black man living in a dangerous environment, he is a gangster of the Black Disciples located in Los Santos. He has been living the gangster life since he was 15 years old, due to the harsh treatment from his father which led him to kill his own father and decide to join the Black Disciples. And now he is officially a member of that gang, he is nicknamed Shady among his gangster friends. Becoming a gang member turned him into someone brutal and merciless to his gang's enemies, to the point where he killed a child who turned out to be the enemy's family. The news of the child's death, killed by Shady, spread widely to other gangs allied with his gang's enemies. Now, he is being hunted by those gangs and is promised a large sum of money if they can bring him his head.



This is where Shady's life was first threatened, he woke up from his sleep because he received a phone call from his friend who is also a member of the Black Disciples. His friend said that he had just heard that Shady would be hunted by many gangs that are also allied with his gang's enemies. Shady was shocked and contacted his gang leader, asking for protection from all the threats against him. The leader, who had been bribed by the gang, lied to him and facilitated Shady's murder by providing a supposedly safe hiding place, which turned out to be the last place for Shady. Not stopping there, Shady hurriedly went outside to the place of refuge provided by his superior.



The scene shifts, Shady has already left for the place his superior mentioned, but he doesn't see his superior, instead, it is silent as if uninhabited. He tried to contact his superior, but there was no response. He kept trying repeatedly, but his superior never answered. Suddenly, he realized he was being followed by a car, which turned out to be members of the gang pursuing him. He panicked and hurried into his car to avoid being murdered, but unfortunately, the bullet had already been fired and hit Shady's chest. He was killed and his head was decapitated as proof.

 

CK Screenshots:

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  • Jerxx changed the title to [CN] Shadrias Brooks to Keywon Wallace (JeruxLmao)
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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
16 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Sudah
2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. Diburu karena membunuh anak dari musuhnya

5. Sudah

Posted
1 hour ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

  1. Upload ulang screenshot /myid karena hanya terbaca linknya saja.

Edited.

Posted
1 hour ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Upload ulang, coba gunakan imgur untuk upload screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid.

Baik, sudah saya ganti, silahkan dicek kembali.

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