Marloon Booms Posted February 25, 2025 Posted February 25, 2025 (edited) Efraime_Jorrah https://imgur.com/a/2NcbXKp In 01 24 1998, on a beautiful night in a church in Brooklyn, a boy was born named Efraime Jorrah, and at that time an unwanted tragedy occurred, some criminals looted and killed his father who tried to fight back, and finally his mother entrusted him to the nun in the church to be taken as far away as possible from the location of the incident, not long after the incident Efraime and the nun arrived in Florida, and the nun rented an apartment to live in, the nun took care of and raised Efraime as if he were her own child. Years have passed by Efraime, and now Efraime has grown into a strong and brave teenager, he really likes to fight at school, until when his friend is bullied and he feels his friend is in danger, his instincts are automatically turned on, in the blink of an eye he goes on a very brutal rampage, he beats up every opponent who wants to bother his friends, and at the time after the fight, he was called to the principal's office to face and he was forced to admit his mistake which was actually just trying to help his friends who were being bullied, after the incident Efraime was transferred to a school in a city called Brooklyn, he was transferred by a nurse because he was pressured by the school who wanted Efraime to be transferred as soon as possible. Not long after all those events passed and now Efraime has graduated from school, and he also found unpleasant news coming from the hospital saying that the nurse who had taken care of him for years had passed away, the news immediately made him fall and weak, besides that the nurse had also made a letter with a piece of paper saying that he had several siblings and several cousins that he had to find and protect, and a fact that he saw also said that both of Efraime's parents had died due to the tragedy of the massacre and murder that occurred in the church when Ef was still a baby, Ef promised to take revenge on those people, and he had made up his mind to create a big family that would be filled with oppressed people and outcasts, Ef then left for a big city is called Los Santos to start a great journey there, there Ef already had various drug sales businesses that were quite large, together with his siblings and new family he would start a big project in the city of Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Marloox. Account Forum yang saya miliki: Marloon Booms Saya Marloon Booms selaku pemilik account UCP Marloox bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Efraime_Jorrah) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 26, 2025 by Marloon Booms
Contoriano Posted February 25, 2025 Posted February 25, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Marloon Booms Posted February 26, 2025 Author Posted February 26, 2025 (edited) 1. Ya. 2. Kurang dari 1 bulan. 3. Buat baru. 4. Tidak. 5. Tidak. 6. Di rumah. @Contoriano Edited February 26, 2025 by Marloon Booms
Contoriano Posted February 26, 2025 Posted February 26, 2025 Silahkan selesaikan yang tertulis dibawah ini : Alurkan cerita karakter kamu berada di Los santos untuk sekarang ini.
Marloon Booms Posted February 26, 2025 Author Posted February 26, 2025 Baik sudah saya selesaikan min. @Contoriano
Contoriano Posted February 27, 2025 Posted February 27, 2025 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Marloon Booms, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Contoriano JG:RP Helper Team
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