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Obispo_Monteca


 

 

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   The Monteca's brother was born in 2003 over Tijuana, one of the most criminal cities over Mexico. Obispo ''Pistol'' Monteca and Raul ''Spanky'' Monteca grew up together in their neighbourhood, living with their grandmother as their parents has been passed away since their were child. Since eleven years old, Pistol and Spanky has been doin their activity as an arms dealer and also a drug dealer. Due to their activities, those Juras has been put their name to one of the warrants in their cities.

 

   The day has become while both of them are doin their activities, those Juras caught them distributin their product. Bullets are sprayin down to their bodies, luckily Pistol still has his second chance given by his Creators. Spanky was full of blood and he had a last words for his older brothers. Spanky said leave this city, be a good guy and don't forget to cameback, visit our grandmother and also tell her that we always loved her. Pistol left with no words as he keep his anger to the Juras, planning to get his revenge someday not today.

 

   Pistol finally arrived at Los Santos, where the new life has beguns. He is began his new journey with only one grand on his pocket as he brings from Tijuana. He use it to make a small business like sellin the hotdog,burgers and also alcohol drinks to get a profit for his life. While he was strollin down near Ganton area or as we knew G-Circle, he saw somethin group doin their activities and Pistol seems interested to their activities. The story has begun with Pistol as the Main Character and there is still a long journey to his life, but he will comeback to Tijuana again, visit his grandmother and also he must paid the revenge of his younger brother dead.

 

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

URL Namechange:

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Cheezutoooo

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
$Chezuta$

 


 

Saya Chezuta selaku pemilik account UCP Cheezutoooo bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Obispo_Monteca) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Character Story

Dear @Chezuta,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@mvnko14
JG:RP Helper Team

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