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Jose_Cazalla


 

 

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     Jose Cazalla or Vampire, This man was born in Marinal Canal, West of San Andreas on July 3, 2008. This man was raised by his parents, named Juan Campos and Juliana Cardoba. Since childhood, Jose loved to draw. Jose was a child who excelled in his school, little Jose often received many certificates and scholarships from his school. His days were only spent studying and spending time with his parents. Jose's parents married in 1999, and they gave birth to Jose in 2008. Jose's mother worked at a grocery store near their house, while Jose's father worked as a farmer. Their life was fine, until one day Jose's mother died tragically in the grocery store where she worked, the robbers came in carrying a gun and immediately shot Jose's mother. Jose was devastated by the incident that befell his mother and family. Jose is very sensitive when it comes to family problems, because since childhood Jose has been accustomed to the affection of his mother and father. Jose's father was also very devastated because he lost his beloved wife, since then, Jose's father became a drug addict, and he also did not work. Jose also started to be too lazy to go to school, and he chose to stay at home and lock himself in his room because of the past incident where his mother was killed.

 

     Since then Jose's father also became sensitive, Jose's father could not control his emotions because of the influence of the illegal drugs. Jose's father often beat Jose for no reason, Jose was also very sad to see his father's condition. Jose's father was getting worse, he was sick, and Jose could not take him to the doctor because he had no money, and one day when Jose came home from school, he found his father dead on the sofa with blood pouring on the floor, Jose's father committed suicide. Jose, who saw it was immediately scared and ran to the nearest police station, he reported it to the local police.

 

     Jose was haunted by great trauma because he saw his father die in front of his own eyes. Now Jose lives alone in his house, no one wants to accompany him. He is still devastated by the loss of his mother and father. Jose often screams alone in his house and cries, the neighbors who hear it pretend to be silent, they let Jose live in misery. Jose got worse day by day, he also often consumed illegal drugs, he also joined a local gang called West Side Playboys 13, and committed crimes there to survive.

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
crystalline

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Ragildava_


 

Saya Ragildava_ selaku pemilik account UCP crystalline bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jose_Cazalla) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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10 minutes ago, fujie said:

 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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    edit.png

     

 

1. Ya.

2. 1-3 Bulan.

3. Buat Baru.

4. Tidak.

5. Tidak.

6. Di Rumah.

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I took over the character story with permission from the staff concerned.


Silahkan menjawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan sejujur-jujurnya :


Apakah kamu menggunakan AI atau plagiarisme dalam pembuatan Character story ini? 
Berapa UCP yang kamu miliki selama bermain di JGRP?


Setelah menjawab pertanyaan diatas, ada beberapa yang perlu di revisi dari CS kamu.

  • Penulisan paragraf belum menggunakan Justify, mohon diperbaiki lagi.
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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 

  • Mohon isi keterangan diatas sesuai dengan perintahnya.
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7 jam yang lalu, Bagas_Ivan said:


Silahkan menjawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan sejujur-jujurnya :


Apakah kamu menggunakan AI atau plagiarisme dalam pembuatan Character story ini? 
Berapa UCP yang kamu miliki selama bermain di JGRP?


Setelah menjawab pertanyaan diatas, ada beberapa yang perlu di revisi dari CS kamu.

  • Penulisan paragraf belum menggunakan Justify, mohon diperbaiki lagi.
  • Mohon isi keterangan diatas sesuai dengan perintahnya.

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Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Ragildava_,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Bagas_Ivan
JG:RP Helper Team

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