Soyuzar Posted January 29, 2025 Posted January 29, 2025 (edited) Tommy_Achilleo Tommy Achilleo was born on 31 December 1997 in Rome, Italy. He was a very smart kid when he was in High School, even though he always fought those who dared to disturb him. There's an experience that haunts him to this day, making him jealous of seeing an arrogant rich kid, that's because he comes from a fairly simple family who works hard to support Tommy in his education and his daily needs. But even though he came from a fairly simple family, he used it well in the educational and non-educational fields, such as playing music, reading books, and so on. But his mentality is powerful because he was educated hard by his parents. Even though he occasionally misused his mental strength to beat people who often bullied him. But now, he can control his emotions from his harsh mental behavior to become a weak and gentle person. Later on, Tommy chose to migrate from his city and country, Italy. He migrated to the city of Los Santos in the United States of America. Tommy met a few friends in Los Santos named Casey. Casey is a friend that shows Tommy a few things about his job or other things that might fulfill Tommy's living. Casey shows Tommy how hard to work by moving from city to city with many robbers around them. But now Tommy works as a fisherman and also holds several side jobs such as working in the San Andreas Sanitary Department, but if he has free time, Tommy can spend his time working as a taxi driver. All of this is by Casey's suggestion about fulfilling Tommy's living in Los Santos. But even though he has that job, Tommy is not yet satisfied with his progress in earning money to fulfill his life. So he decided to continue those jobs but on one condition, Tommy wanted to be working on advertising thing which may have been his talent all along. Tommy can speak fluent English in formal language, but even though it is formal, the way he speaks can attract people's attention. By that condition, he decided to reduce his working hours at his current various jobs. Unfortunately, Tommy failed to achieve what he really wanted. In fact, it worsens Tommy's economy as he decide before by reducing his working hours. He was really stressed at that time. But even so, he has Casey's support in the fields he wants to achieve. With the support of his friend, he continues to work hard to this day to achieve what he wants. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Soyuzar Account Forum yang saya miliki: Soyuzar Saya Soyuzar selaku pemilik account UCP Soyuzar bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Tommy_Achilleo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited January 30, 2025 by Soyuzar
FilthyKikz Posted January 29, 2025 Posted January 29, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Soyuzar Posted January 29, 2025 Author Posted January 29, 2025 (edited) Ya Kurang dari 1 bulan Buat baru Tidak Tidak Di rumah Edited January 29, 2025 by Soyuzar Ada soalnya min, saya perbaiki jadi jawaban aja.
FilthyKikz Posted January 29, 2025 Posted January 29, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan ada beberapa revisi dan pertanyaan : 18 jam yang lalu, Soyuzar said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Edit bagian ini lalu isi dengan Account UCP dan Account Forum milikmu! Apakah Character Story milikmu sudah 300 kata? Jika belum, buat sampai 300 kata lebih dan pisahkan jadi 3 paragraf. Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu memiliki Forum lain selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jika ada sebutkan! Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu memiliki UCP lain selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jika ada sebutkan! Jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu menggunakan AI untuk membuat Character Story ini?
Soyuzar Posted January 30, 2025 Author Posted January 30, 2025 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Tidak ada 4. Tidak ada 5. Tidak
FilthyKikz Posted January 31, 2025 Posted January 31, 2025 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Soyuzar, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @FilthyKikz JG:RP Helper Team
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