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Han_Qin


 

 

     On May 16, 2003, at 7:05 PM in Shaanxi province, a Blood Moon or Lunar Eclipse took place, lasting for over an hour. At 7:38 PM, a kids named Han Qin was born. Han Qin came from a family with a dark past, the Zhan clan, whose name had been just a rumor for thousands of years, but it was real. That's why he was given the last name Han, instead of Zhan, because Zhan was seen as a cursed surname. The Zhan clan was infamous for carrying out mass executions during the wars to unify China, led by one of the great generals of the Qin dynasty, Bai Qi, especially during the Changping Battle, where they executed 450,000 soldiers and Zhou Kingdom civilians who had surrendered. There were millions more killed before and after that, all carried out specifically by the Zhan clan. The reason he was named Han Qin was because the Zhan clan always saw the Qin Dynasty as powerful, and they named their descendants Han Qin, meaning "Glory of Qin."

 

     But that was all part of the past, a history everyone wanted to forget, even though it happened over 2,000 years ago. Now, Han Qin grew up in a small village in Shaanxi province, as a rebellious and wild kid. Even after so many years, there was still something in him, a natural trait passed down through generations the trait of being a "killer" and "torturer." As a child, Han Qin liked to torment people he didn't like, because, in his mind, if he didn't, there wouldn't be peace for him. People around him thought he was scary and even called him a demon.

 

     Years passed, and Han Qin kept living with those traits until they led him down a dark path. One day, while walking around with his friends, he saw a girl he liked who happened to be his classmate being harassed by local thugs. They were even touching her, and as soon as Han Qin saw this, he got enraged and rushed over to beat up the thugs. It was almost unbelievable that a teenager could beat olds man, but he did. Afterward, Han Qin dragged one of them into an alley, tortured him, and left him there. The thug ended up dying from blood loss after hours of being left in that condition. Not long after, the police came for Han Qin, and his family tried everything to help him, but they couldn’t, because it was a serious crime murder. During his journey, Han Qin tried to escape, and he managed to get away. He was hunted for years, even after moving to another city, but he was still being tracked down. Eventually, Han Qin decided to leave China and head for the United States, specifically to Los Santos, to start over.

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

URL Namechange:

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Yondaime

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
$FIREHAND$

 


 

Saya FIREHAND selaku pemilik account UCP yondaime bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Han_Qin) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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Mohon dijawab dahulu pertanyaan dibawah ini:
1. Kamu punya UCP berapa? coba sebutin semuanya.
2. Apakah CS kamu ini merupakan CS milik orang lain?
3. Apakah CS kamu ini sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan yang berlaku?

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1. 1
2. Pure buatan sendiri, bahkan ada revisi dari versi sebelumnya yang berbeda.
3. Harusnya iya, karena ngambil dari beberapa latar belakang sejarah dan beberapa rumor dicerita rakyat dan yang diambil hanya dianggap keturunan doang yang dimana itu bukan keturunan langsung dari Bai Qi jadi tidak terlalu membual sih dan yang dibesar besarin hanya cerita di masa lampau doang, dan di masa sekarangnya harusnya masih sesuai garis normal, dan keseluruhannya harusnya kalo dari opini pribadi yes.

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @FIREHAND,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@JjLennox
JG:RP Helper Team

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