ariqfadhil24 [CN] Potter McYeager to Griffith Bellamy (Essechange)

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UCP Name: Essechange

Old Character: Potter McYeager

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/275308-potter_mcyeager-essechange/

 

 

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New Character: Griffith Bellamy

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United State of America

 

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Reason for name change request:

L&A FNG, create new character & new role.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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Bukti OOC JAIL oleh admin BGenk

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Bukti /myid

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Bukti /mp

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CK Story:

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Eight and a half months after the deaths of several Gehanna MC members, Potter McYeager continues to work as a mechanic at El-Galeron Garage in Montgomery. He was the only one still living in Montgomery of the many Gehanna members who had died and passed away due to tragedy. But during the afternoon in front of Montgomery's flat, he met Paul Cazalla. Paul Cazalla was wanted by the police for the biggest drug trafficking crime in Los Santos decades ago. He was back in Montgomery on business with Potter McYeager. Paul told him that he had not been able to meet with Potter for a long time because of his fugitive status. Paul invited Potter to share all the money the Club had made. The two got into a car and drove to the bank.

On the way to the bank, Paul told me that his brother Carlos Cazalla had been killed by the cartel. Carlos Cazalla was a good member and had handled legal business for the club in his time. Potter was shocked and appalled at what Paul had told him. Now Paul can only give the rest of the Club's assets to Potter to be able to rebuild the existing business, Then, Potter said that he would build and improve the El-Galeron Garage Business again. When they arrived at the bank, Paul took and put a large sum of money into a black bag. While taking care of the money, Paul said that he would return to Mexico in three days. Potter didn't say a word, if at all, about Paul leaving. Potter could only hope that all was well with Paul.

Because the two of them were still focused on talking, when they left the bank there was a black Jeep following them. The black Jeep had been spying on the two of them from the moment they met in Montgomery. Paul drove Potter back to Montgomery, and they parted ways. Potter stashed the money on a shelf in El-Galeron's garage and continued his work as a mechanic. Shortly afterward, a man with long hair arrived. The man took a gun and pointed it at Potter. The mysterious man was intent on lurking and would take all the money from Paul. The man is Misterio Humano, a cartel hitman. He intends to take the money due to problems between the cartel and the Cazalla brother's (Paul and Carlos). Misterio took the money that Potter had told him, immediately shot Potter in the chest and head using an MK-23 handgun. As a result Potter McYeager died immediately from the shot. Potter McYeager once said to the Club President, that he would die in Montgomery. And all of that really happened today.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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 Ijin menjawab:

1. Sudah sesuai, >300 words; 3 paragraf

2. sudah sesuai, 10 ssrp

3. sudah tidak ada property sesuai evidence yg saya berikan

4. perampokan uang 

5. Sudah dalam penjara pada 19/01, sesuai evidence yg saya berikan.

Mohon konfirmasi dan feedbacknya @Ariqfadhil24. Thank you.

 

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Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid diberi tanda diatas screenshotnya.

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7 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid diberi tanda diatas screenshotnya.

Already revised. Please kindly check @Ariqfadhil24 

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I was ready to revised, can you check it? thank you. @Ariqfadhil24 

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Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

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Review.

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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.