$STRVNGER$ Posted January 14, 2025 Posted January 14, 2025 UCP Name: Jack_Force Old Character: Niall_Buchannon Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/112846-niall_buchannon-jack_force/ New Character: Diego_Ariza Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Colombia Reason for name change request: Ingin mengganti alur roleplay dan menghilangkan criminal record Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti Spoiler OOC Jail Spoiler /myid Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Niall Buchannon was a member of a 1%er motorcycle club. After leaving the MC, he tried to live a normal life. But after so many years of violence, it was hard for him to adjust. The urge to go back to his old ways kept growing, especially because he was struggling with money. His criminal record made it almost impossible to get a steady job, and his debts were piling up. Even though he wanted a fresh start, Niall couldn’t stop himself from returning to crime. One day, he decided to sell illegal firearms again, hoping to make some quick money. He didn’t think things through or prepare properly, but the temptation was too strong. Niall received a call from someone interested in buying his guns. The buyer asked to meet at an old factory, and Niall agreed. He arrived just as the sun was setting, casting long shadows across the derelict structure. The place was eerily quiet, and the air smelled of rust and decay, but Niall pressed forward. When he entered, he saw a man waiting for him—a lean figure with sharp features and a calm yet unsettling demeanor. The man introduced himself as Alexis Freeman and seemed particularly interested in the shotgun Niall brought. After a short conversation, Alexis asked to try the weapon. Niall hesitated briefly, his instincts warning him, but he dismissed the thought and handed it over. In that brief moment of distraction, Alexis turned the gun on him. Alexis explained that he was there for revenge. Years ago, when Niall was still part of his motorcycle club, his MC had clashed with a rival gang. In the chaos, Niall had mistakenly thought Alexis’ father was part of the enemy gang and shot him dead. Without warning, Alexis fired. The first shot hit Niall in the chest, followed by a second. Niall stumbled, blood spreading across his shirt. He grabbed at his chest, struggling to breathe, but his strength was slipping away. He tried to stay upright, but Alexis fired again, this time hitting him in the head. Niall fell to the ground, motionless. Alexis stood over him, watching as his life faded away. The factory grew silent, except for the sound of Alexis’s footsteps as he walked away, leaving Niall’s body behind. CK Screenshots: Bukti
$Sobersanta$ Posted January 14, 2025 Posted January 14, 2025 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$STRVNGER$ Posted January 14, 2025 Author Posted January 14, 2025 28 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Revenge Kill (Pembunuhan) 5. Sudah
$Sobersanta$ Posted January 16, 2025 Posted January 16, 2025 Pending, berikut beberapa point pending Kata-kata pada CK story masih kurang dari 300 kata, tambahkan. Cari nama yang lain yah, nama "Diego Montana" famouse name.
$STRVNGER$ Posted January 16, 2025 Author Posted January 16, 2025 19 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said: Pending, berikut beberapa point pending Kata-kata pada CK story masih kurang dari 300 kata, tambahkan. Cari nama yang lain yah, nama "Diego Montana" famouse name. Edited, Maximo Ariza?
$Sobersanta$ Posted January 17, 2025 Posted January 17, 2025 23 hours ago, Theodorus said: Edited, Maximo Ariza? Coba cari yang lain yah, famouse name.
$STRVNGER$ Posted January 17, 2025 Author Posted January 17, 2025 Edited, sudah search juga buat Diego_Ariza bukan siapa2, please check @Ariqfadhil24
$Sobersanta$ Posted January 18, 2025 Posted January 18, 2025 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
BGenk Posted January 19, 2025 Posted January 19, 2025 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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