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Chriss_Skywalker [Skywalker13]

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Chriss_Skywalker

 

 

A kid Named Chriss Skywalker was born in 1995, in Ohio, United States of America. He has a Good and Kind Family, but when he was 10 years old, his Father and his mother died in a plane crash. And he lived as an orphan when he was 10 years old. he lived with his grandfather in Ohio for 10 years. He helped his grandfather work as a trader for those 10 years. And one day he felt that he had troubled his grandfather for the last 10 years, and he decided to move out so as not to bother his grandfather anymore.

 

Short story, he has moved to his new city, named Los Santos. At first, he didn't know what he should do in his new city. However, he thought about doing a side job first to earn some money to survive in Los Santos. And after several months of working in Los Santos, Chriss realized that the salary from his side job couldn't cover his needs in that city. And now he's confused about how to get more money so he can live longer in that city. But somehow, after Chriss worked for a couple of years, he felt that his salary was enough to meet his daily needs, and he didn't think about his financial problems anymore. And one day, he was looking for a place to live, but he didn't have enough money to buy a house, and when he was thinking about his finances, he saw an advertisement that provided a homestay at a fairly cheap rate, and he immediately met the homestay owner and rent the homestay for several weeks.

 

And finally, he could experience real life, without bothering anyone. And he was proud of himself, that he could live well without his parents guiding him. And one day, while Chriss was daydreaming on his motorcycle, a man named William came along, he invited Chriss to join a community whose aim was to gather and tell stories about each other's lives. and Chriss also agreed and joined that community. And until now, Chriss has lived a pretty good life, although he had to work hard in the early days when he came to Los Santos, but now his life is safe and peaceful.

 

 

 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Skywalker13

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Ravv

 

 

Saya Ravv selaku pemilik account UCP Skywalker13 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Chriss_Skywalker) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( 4-6 Bulan )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah)
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5 jam yang lalu, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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    edit.png

     

 

1.Ya

2.5 bulan

3.Baru

4.Tidak

5.Tidak

6.Rumah

Ravv Newbie

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4 jam yang lalu, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan jujur.

  • Apakah ada UCP lain yang kamu mainkan selain UCP ini?
  • Kamu bermain dimana? ( Rumah atau Warnet )

1.Tidak ada

2.Di rumah

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1 minute ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Saya akan ajukan pertanyaan kembali, apakah FransiskusBranz, agengkun, Mahesaa123 adalah UCP milik kamu? jawab dengan jujur.

bukan.

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Character Story

Dear @Ravv,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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3 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
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Character Story

Dear @Ravv,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

udah saya edit min

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59 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Saya ajukan pertanyaan terakhir coba jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu mengerjakan Character Story menggunakan bantuan AI?

tidak sama sekali.

Sobersanta The Contributor

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
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Character Story

Dear @Ravv,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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