Konkong Bjirr Posted December 22, 2024 Posted December 22, 2024 (edited) Sherburne Khareem There was a young man who was daydreaming in a remote place. His name is Sherburne Khareem. He is 18 years old. When he was 15 years old, his father died, named Raesan Phillip. His father came from Africa. His father was a very cruel gangster. His father died because he was stabbed by his enemy. And his mother's name is Aakaanksha Baheera his mother came from India his mother was a good person and she was trusted by the police but his mother was kidnapped and raped by a group of criminals his mother was killed by a group of criminals and now Burne can only reflect in his house because he is an orphan when his father and mother died Burne has the intention of revenge but Burne no longer has anyone Burne lives in his mother and father's house. Burne found his mother and father's treasure, Burne used it to travel to America, precisely in the Los Santos area. Before he left to travel, Burne stole people's wallets and cellphones on the bus. Burne was chased by people, but Burne had a physical heritage from his father and Burne had a cunning and generous heritage from his mother. After Burne sold his cellphone and took the money in his wallet, Burne rushed to the station to travel to Los Santos, namely America. When he arrived there, Burne launched his action to pickpocket but now Burne was unlucky because Burne was caught and beaten until he fainted. After Burne woke up from fainting, Burne didn't know where Burne was and it turned out that he was taken by a fairly old person to an empty house that rarely had people passing by. Burne tried to get out but Burne was very hungry. Burne launched his action again to take someone's wallet in a very crowded place. Burne was not afraid. Burne still took the wallet and he got 50 dolars from the wallet. Unknowingly, it was getting dark. Burne didn't know where to sleep. Burne tried to find a quiet place. Finally, Burne found a warehouse that was very messy and very dark. Burne was forced to sleep there. Because Burne was sleeping, Burne was surprised by the police who suddenly woke Burne up. He was suspected of being a drug addict, but Burne was not detected as a drug addict and as a result Burne was not arrested. Burne had thought about working as a drug dealer, but he couldn't bear the risk. As a result, Burne worked in illegal fights. He fought on the streets and bet. Burne sometimes won and sometimes lost. Burne had earned a lot of money from street fights, but his face was bruised and his hands were swollen from fighting. He was offered drugs by someone and Burne tried to buy them. As a result, Burne became addicted to drugs. Burne worked to buy the drugs. He didn't get any money from his job and he was depressed and tried to pickpocket but didn't get any results. As a result, he now doesn't use drugs anymore and he still has a grudge against the person who killed his parents Questions Character Story Pertama: 2 kali Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Kongkong11 Account Forum yang saya miliki: konkong Bjirr Saya Konkong Bjirr selaku pemilik account UCP Kongkong11 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Sherburne Khareem) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited December 22, 2024 by Konkong Bjirr
Nadeez Posted December 22, 2024 Posted December 22, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Konkong Bjirr Posted December 22, 2024 Author Posted December 22, 2024 1. tidak 2.kurang dari 1 bulan 3.Buat baru 4tidak 5.tidak 6.di warnet
Nadeez Posted December 23, 2024 Posted December 23, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Konkong Bjirr, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Nadeez JG:RP Helper Team
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