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Felipez_Quanzros [Xyyrii]

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Felipez Quanzros

 

 

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     One day a Mexican child named Felipez Quanzros was born in the Acapulco area in 2000 on the 20th of the 12th month, his mother named Caty Quan and his father named Gianlugio Felipez, Felipez cried hysterically after he came out of his mother's womb and his father calmed Caty to stay calm when he took Felipez out, after coming out of the womb Felipez was checked for health by the doctor and the results did not disappoint Caty and Gian because the results were healthy and fit, after that Felipez's mother was still staying at the hospital because she had recently given birth, the next day Felipez was brought home to be taken care of by his parents because he was allowed to go home.

 

     12 years later... Felipez was already a teenager who had to be closely guarded by his parents, because in his area there were many drug dealers who had a lot of underage men like Felipez, so Felipez was carefully guarded by his parents, Felipez was a bit uncomfortable because he felt that he was not allowed to go anywhere when he wanted to go out, even though he was guarded by his parents who were always alert to very dangerous situations, but Felipez quietly left his house because he wanted to hang out with people his age, and here Felipez's nature was discovered to be naughty and disobedient to the words of his parents.

 

     A few years later, he was already 24 years old which is the age of entering adulthood, when Felipez was walking towards the city he got very bad news because his parents died due to a very drastic accident at the time his parents wanted to take a vacation to the beach but fate did not favor his parents, he was devastated by this bad news, he immediately left the city to get his living expenses by his own means.

 

     1 month later, Felipez got a job as a cashier at a supermarket store because it was difficult to find a job that Felipez wanted as an office worker, and he was fulfilled and a little sad because his parents left him alone

 

 

 

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Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

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Tidak ada, hanya Xyyrii

 

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$Xyyrii$

 

 

Saya Xyyrii selaku pemilik account UCP Xyyrii bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Felipez Quanzros) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Xyyrii Forumer

$Xyyrii$

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10 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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    edit.png

     

 

1.tidak

2.mau 3 tahun

3.buat baru

4. tidak

5.tidak

6.dirumah

Xyyrii Forumer

$Xyyrii$

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2 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan jujur.

  • Apakah ada UCP lain yang kamu mainkan selain UCP ini?
  • Kamu bermain dimana? ( Rumah atau Warnet )

1. tidak ada sama sekali

2. di rumah saya bermain

Sobersanta The Contributor

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Character Story

Dear @Xyyrii,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

Xyyrii Forumer

$Xyyrii$

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16 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Xyyrii,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

sudah min, sudah di betulkan cuman di kasih spasi di awal paragraf 5 spasi

Xyyrii Forumer

$Xyyrii$

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9 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Saya ajukan pertanyaan terakhir coba jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu mengerjakan Character Story menggunakan bantuan AI?

saya hanya memakai microsoft word setelah itu saya translate kan ke website deepl.com saya tidak pernah memakai ai ataupun yang lain, saya murni buatan saya

Sobersanta The Contributor

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Xyyrii,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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