Rapz Me Posted November 5, 2024 Posted November 5, 2024 (edited) Rafael_Lawson Rafael Lawson was born on East Los Santos, born as an poor Family was really give an impact to him as a kid. her life is getting more miserable after her dad lost her job, her dad turn into a drunkard and Gambler that always looking for a trouble at Bar and Casino. Rafael was expelled from the school because her parents can't pay the tuition fee and start helping her mom selling tamales in the hood. even though they make good money by selling tamales, her dad always try to take the money from mom, until her mom refuse to give him the money and coming back to Grandma house. her mom didn't divorce with her dad. they just seperate. Rafael dad was really devastated that her wife left her alone, and after realizing that he had to change, he began looking for a work as construction worker. and saving for getting a better life. After a very long time for saving and fixing her habit as drunkard. he persuaded motherto return home and live together again. Rafael then come back to her dad home and start to live again as an happy boy once again. her mom also thanks to her dad because he want to change his habit for her wife and son. They live peacefully after that. but little did they know something bad is about to happen. after Rafael dad coming back home from work he was suddenly arrested and detained by some police officer, hewas accused of distributing a drugs, maybe her dad was an ex drunkard but he never used drugs and never distribute them. after her mom meet her dad at police station, her mom suddenly realize thats her husband was being detain because of false accusation by some police officer. this corrupted police was payed by some goverment officials to randomly pick someone and accuse them as drug dealer, Rafael father was one of them. there is nothing her mom and Rafael can do because they are against the Goverment. Rafael father was sentenced to be shot dead by firing squad. Rafael and her mother cant do anything. her mother was really. His mother was very devastated by the sentence the judge gave to Rafael father, as was Rafael, he really hated the police and the government for what they did to his father. her mother became very stressed. and crazy after that incident. Now, all Rafael can do is put his mother in a mental hospital in Liberty City. and pay people to look after him. Rafael then returned to the city of Los Santos and looked for ways to take revenge on the police and government. Looking for work and relationships will make it easier for him to carry out his revenge. After come back to Los Santos. he try to get more relation with a lot of bad people, trying to get break through all the problem, Rafael ended up became a badguy and several time getting detained by police, but it didn't stop him for being an ops of goverment. He couldn't control his desire to take revenge on the government, as long as he is still running and alive, he will do anything to make things difficult for the government,Rafael is still a worker in the city in general, but everyone doesn't know that he also works for the cartel, Rafael is still a worker in the city in general, but everyone doesn't know that he also works for the cartel. after the her last resort on a jail. this time he was trying not to commit crimes. before he come back to her place as an cartel. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: RapRafly Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Rapz Me Saya Rapz Me selaku pemilik account UCP RapRafly bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Rafael_Lawson) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited November 9, 2024 by Rapz Me penambahan kata
fujie Posted November 5, 2024 Posted November 5, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Rapz Me Posted November 5, 2024 Author Posted November 5, 2024 (edited) 1. Tidak. Saya pernah melakukannya di Beberapa Server lain. 2. 4-6 bulan. sempat berhenti main karna urusan pekerjaan 3. Buat Baru 4. tidak ada. akun UCP saya Hanya Ini 5. Tidak Ada . Akun forum saya hanya Ini 6. Main menggunakan Laptop Saya sendiri dan bermain biasanya di kantor dan rumah @fujie Edited November 5, 2024 by Rapz Me Penambahan Kata
Rapz Me Posted November 5, 2024 Author Posted November 5, 2024 3 jam yang lalu, fujie said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Tidak. Saya pernah melakukannya di Beberapa Server lain. 2. 4-6 bulan. sempat berhenti main karna urusan pekerjaan 3. Buat Baru 4. tidak ada. akun UCP saya Hanya Ini 5. Tidak Ada . Akun forum saya hanya Ini 6. Main menggunakan Laptop Saya sendiri dan bermain biasanya di kantor dan rumah @fujie
fujie Posted November 6, 2024 Posted November 6, 2024 Ada beberapa hal yang perlu saya tanyakan dan perlu kamu perbaiki. Tolong edit bagian ini dan tambahkan nama UCP dan tag forum kamu. On 11/5/2024 at 2:00 PM, Rapz Me said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu miliki. Apakah character story kamu sudah memenuhi ketentuan 300 kata? Tolong jawab dengan JUJUR poin 4 dan 5 karena ini berpengaruh pada character story kamu. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu? Apakah kamu mencontek Character Story milik orang lain dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu?
Rapz Me Posted November 7, 2024 Author Posted November 7, 2024 On 4/11/2024 at 23.00, Rapz Me said: Rapz Me
Rapz Me Posted November 7, 2024 Author Posted November 7, 2024 1. Sudah 2. RapRafly. hanya itu. 3. Ya, saya telah lakukan pengecekan dan CS saya lebih dari 600 kata. 4. Tidak, tidak ada bantuan AI semua asli karangan saya. 5. Tidak, tidak sama sekali. @fujie
fujie Posted November 8, 2024 Posted November 8, 2024 On 11/5/2024 at 2:00 PM, Rapz Me said: Rafael_ Lawson Rafael_Lawson Hapus bagian ini dibawah foto character story kamu.
Rapz Me Posted November 9, 2024 Author Posted November 9, 2024 5 jam yang lalu, fujie said: Hapus bagian ini dibawah foto character story kamu. Udah Min @fujie
fujie Posted November 9, 2024 Posted November 9, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Rapz Me, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @fujie JG:RP Helper Team
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