pending Raul_Aguila [AkRow]

[AkRow]

Raul Aguila

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Raul Aguila, born on March 19, 2005. Dallas, Texas, he grew up in a Mexican family which cannot be said to be an immigrant family, Raul has a cousin named Julian, Raul and Julian have a very big bond between them, they even went to the same school in the same place the environment. Raul's family, as well as Julian's family, always moved from place to place, because they couldn't afford the rent, since then, Raul has been thinking about any way to get some money, quickly and easily. Dallas, is a place that has a very high crime status, Raul could only see the activities of his neighborhood working, from the sound of gunshots, drug sales, and accidentally saw how people in his neighborhood made money very easily, when Raul was 8 years old. , Raul had to move to Los Santos, with his cousin because he couldn't afford the rent.
 

When Raul turned 14, Raul's cousin, Julian. He's got a way to make money for himself, from selling goods, one of them. Julian even has his own crew, the graffiti crew. Raul still has the opportunity to go to school, but not Julian, who has entered a slum life on the streets. Raul was always careful every time he walked to school, but Raul had some friends from Ganton Housing Projects, who let Raul hang out with his friends, but Raul saw his cousin Julian with a street business, not having much money but enough to live on, Raul finally asked Julian To make money quickly, Julian only told Raul to sell his goods, such as shoes, clothes and so on. Raul always sells Julian's goods quickly, and day after day, Julian just tells Raul to sell his goods quickly, so that Raul has money and can immediately buy whatever Raul wants.
 

Raul Aguila, at the age of 15, was in a situation where Raul felt ambitious, got into fights, didn't attend class, and even got expelled from school, without caring. And everything changed, Julian already had his own crew, Raul wanted to be involved in Julian's crew, but with a lack of trust, Julian wanted Raul to put graffiti in a certain area, Raul just rushed and did what he was told, but the situation didn't go as expected, Raul was completely beaten up. by Julian's rival, Raul returned to Julian with a battered face, Julian could only give Raul a handgun, if Raul wanted to prove himself and take revenge at the same time, Raul rushed at night, Raul made an action by opening a shot at his rival, but The time was not right for Raul to make this action, Raul was finally stopped by the police, and arrested, but did not serve the full sentence, because Raul was still a minor, but Julian found out that Raul had been arrested, and waited for Raul to be released. Now, Raul is 19 and free, and it's getting noticed that Raul can do something, and now Raul is making decisions on the streets.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
AkRow

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
AkRow

 

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Saya AkRow selaku pemilik account UCP AkRow bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Raul_Aguila) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[fujie]

review

[fujie]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[AkRow]

1. Tidak
2. 3 tahun lebih
3. Buat baru
4. Hanya UCP AkRow
5. Hanya @AkRow
6. Dirumah

[fujie]

Ada beberapa hal yang perlu saya tanyakan dan perlu kamu perbaiki.

1. Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu miliki.
2. Apakah character story kamu sudah memenuhi ketentuan 300 kata?
3. Tolong jawab dengan JUJUR poin 3 dan 4 karena ini berpengaruh pada character story kamu. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu?
4. Apakah kamu mencontek Character Story milik orang lain dalam pembuatan Character Story kamu?

[AkRow]

1. AkRow
2. Melebihi 300 kata
3. Tidak selama sekali, saya selalu menggunakan karakter yang ingin di gunakan roleplay FnG, pastinya melakukan background kriminal.
4. Tidak selama sekali

[fujie]

Silahkan untuk merubah fotonya menjadi foto real life, jangan in-game.

[AkRow]

@fujie done editing..

[fujie]

Accepted.

[fujie]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @AkRow,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@fujie
JG:RP Helper Team