DaffaRexandro Posted October 2, 2024 Posted October 2, 2024 UCP Name: DaffaRexandro Old Character: Maxhill_Edwards Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/286738-maxhill_edwards-daffarexandro/ New Character: Lydia_Roberts Gender: Perempuan (Female) Origin: United States of America Reason for name change request: Force Character Killed by San Andreas Police Department, Higanbana Bosozoku. (Approved by Faction Admin and done with Detective Bureau) Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti Persetujuan Admin Faction dan Detective Bureau tentang FCK Maxhill_Edwards Spoiler Detective Bureau (Yth. Marc_Eisenhower) Faction Admin (Yth. Admin January) /mp Spoiler /myid Spoiler OOC Jail Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Maxhill Jason Edwards Jr. or Yusaka Maeda, 25 years old, Japanese-American, is one of the honorable members (senpai) of the Higanbana Bosozoku. His American nationality and culture were no barriers to his pursuit of a higher position in the Japanese biker gang. His involvement with the Hasegawa Crew, a dedicated Japanese mob crew trusted by Yakuza group Tatsuyuki-kai to distribute illicit goods made Maxhill “Trickster” Edwards' name one of the highlights on the police work board alongside Saito “Jester” Kimura, Hasegawa “Shiroyasha” Takumi, and Nariyoshi “Hoshu” Tadami. Even so, Maxhill Edwards is not an easy person to catch. He and Saito Kimura work together to protect each other from the police, leaving Nariyoshi “Hoshu” Tadami and Hasegawa “Shiroyasha” Takumi behind in favor of what they consider to be more important than just an unstable motorcycle gang. Maxhill Edwards and Saito Kimura made their escape after receiving a share of the Higanbana Bosozoku organization's coffers. At first, Nariyoshi Tadami and Hasegawa Takumi are unaware of their true intentions. Maxhill and Saito were two of the members known for their loyalty to the bosozoku, so it was a no-brainer for Nariyoshi and Hasegawa to include their names in the organization's cash distribution records. Like the plot mentioned earlier, Maxhill and Saito immediately went on the run after receiving the huge sum of money. The incident of Maxhill and Saito's escape was eventually discovered by Nariyoshi and Hasegawa, which fueled their resentment of the betrayal. Swear words were exchanged for some time, so that the other bosozoku senpai could dispel the strange feeling within them about Maxhill and Saito's betrayal. Maxhill Edwards and Saito Kimura's lives were no longer filled with tranquility. While the two were at their temporary lodgings, news stories about the “Trickster & Jester” appeared several times. For a long time, Maxhill and Saito have known that they are now the most wanted fugitives by the San Andreas Police Department. Feeling insecure about the facts, Maxhill decided to take an official oath from Tatsuyuki-kai 'San Fierro Yakuza'. Saito's unstable nature led the officials to detain him for some time, so Maxhill was asked to control Saito. Sensing an opportunity, Maxhill Edwards eventually instigated Saito Kimura to assist him in taking back Fujiwara Keiko from Kotaro Fujigawa, East Dragon Yakuza boss, East Los Santos. Saito agreed, provided there was money afterwards. Time passes, day after day passes, Saito Kimura and Maxhill Edwards launch a number of crazy and inappropriate actions against East Dragon in the hope that Maxhill can meet and live with Fujiwara Keiko again. Hearing this, Kotaro Fujigawa, Fujiwara Keiko, and the rest of the East Dragon family were not happy about the inappropriate actions of the two. Later, Fujiwara Keiko decided to call Ienaga Hoshi, the boss of Tatsuyuki-kai, San Fierro Yakuza to talk about the stupid thing done by his soldier. Ienaga Hoshi knew Fujiwara Keiko well when the young girl worked for Tatsuyuki-kai as a waitress and tattoo artist, so Ienaga considered her indirectly as part of his closest people (Kanbu). Listening to the unpleasant and insignificant things done by Maxhill, has ignited the fire of Ienaga Hoshi's anger to issue a kill order. After the issuance of the death order against Maxhill Edwards, her life was not calm. Because, wherever he is, Tatsuyuki-kai and East Dragon will continue to target him. His anxiety about this condition, forced him to move from one city to another in a period of every 1 week until he got to Dillimore. Arriving in Dillimore, Maxhill Edwards called Saito Kimura to ask for his help for making Tatsuyuki-kai and East Dragon want to kill him. This time, Saito Kimura could not be instigated by Maxhill Edwards again, so Maxhill had to fight alone. From a distance, came a person named Tatsumi Kuranosuke, a “former” soldier of Tatsuyuki-kai. They had a few conversations, until eventually the police surrounded the place because Maxhill neglected to turn off his cell phone after calling Saito Kimura. A feeling of panic and confusion came over Maxhill Edwards, which made him decide to take Tatsumi Kuranosuke hostage. The offer made by the San Andreas Police Department was unsatisfactory, so Maxhill took Tatsumi inside to be killed. Mahxill tried to escape by the back door, but unfortunately it was locked. The incident left Maxhill trapped and dead with multiple gunshot wounds he received as a result of the gun battle and the murder of his hostage, Tatsumi Kuranosuke. CK Screenshots: Bukti
$Sobersanta$ Posted October 2, 2024 Posted October 2, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
DaffaRexandro Posted October 2, 2024 Author Posted October 2, 2024 1. Sudah sesuai dengan kententuan, yaitu 760 kata. 2. Sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan, yaitu total 10 SSRP. 3. Sudah sangat bersih dari property. 4. Maxhill Edwards sebagai Special Arrest Warrant yang merupakan drug-lord dari Higanbana Bosozoku. Polisi melakukan penggerebekan, namun Maxhill melawan dengan gencatan senjata dan membunuh sandra sehingga dia tewas karena berondongan timah panas. 5. Sudah di dalam penjara.
Matchalattee Posted October 3, 2024 Posted October 3, 2024 Sebelumnya CK ini telah saya denied, namun setelah melakukan justifikasi saudara @DaffaRexandro di PM forum saya maka CK ini saya approve.
Matchalattee Posted October 3, 2024 Posted October 3, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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