ariqfadhil24 [CN] Chesterfield Williams to Kwanzaa Pierce (1204)

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UCP Name: 1204

Old Character: Chesterfield Williams

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/303998-chesterfield_williams-1204/

 

 

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New Character: Kwanzaa Pierce

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Jamaica

 

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Reason for name change request:

Penggantian Char Dev

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

OOC JAIL

/myid

/mp

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Chesterfield Williams was unlike others coming up in Peckham Mandem. While the people around him had reconciled to a certain extent with their fates-a life so riddled with violence and tragedy-young Chesterfield, otherwise known as "Liams," had much larger visions that were no doubt more conventional. He and his best friend Noah started some small business selling baked potatoes. The idea, nevertheless was basic, and it appealed to the locals. The tiny shack they had built in Jefferson began to pay off, and for one fleeting moment, it seemed as though their fate had become promising. It wasn't until Noah suddenly disappeared that the hope came crashing down and Liams was left to manage his own business.
 
Being by himself without his partner, the operation became a hard thing to keep afloat for Liams. It was too much work, and all the momentum that they had was slowly slipping away. He soon realized he couldn't handle the business himself and needed a new plan. Not to be defeated, Liams bought a beat-up old mini-van, refurbished and converted it into a mobile baked potato stand. This new direction took him to a whole different level of determination. He hoped that by traveling around town, he would get to a larger number of customers and restore his failing business. The days seemed to pass in the manner of his plans working-Commerce and Playa del Seville seemed to be districts busy enough for him to set shop, and the money started coming again. Liam's felt a glimmer of hope that just maybe things were starting to right themselves.

 

But on the third day of selling baked potatoes in Playa del Seville, trouble found him. Several African-American gang members came up to his van and told him that he would need to pay a "tax" for operating in their neighborhood. Liams, taking offense to their demand and purposing to live an honest life, refused to pay. In an instant, the situation escalated, with tensions running high. At the height of the argument, one of the gang members pulled out a gun and shot Liams in the head, killing him instantly. Yet another dream from so many coming from his background that had been cut short by senseless violence.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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4 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

• Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
• Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
• Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
• Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
• Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

1. Sudah.

2. Sudah, ada 11 SS.

3. Sudah.

4. Pemalakan yang terjadi pada bisnis Chesterfield, tetapi ia menolak untuk membayarnya.

5. Sudah berada di OOC Jail.

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Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

[Matchalattee]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.