ariqfadhil24 [CN] Noah Oliver to Lipeon_Zarael (MasAL14)

[MA KILLER]

UCP Name: MasAL14

Old Character: Noah Oliver

Old Character Story:

 

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New Character: Lipeon_Zarael

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: USA

 

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Reason for name change request:

FCK'ed by Yellow Sand Project

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC JAIL

 

My id

 

/mp

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

One Saturday afternoon, Noah Oliver fell asleep very soundly in his room. Without realizing it, he fell asleep until the afternoon. When he woke up, it crossed his mind that he wanted to visit his gang called 'Top Gunnaz'. He hurriedly showered and got ready, then turned on the car key to go to that place. He started walking in his white car. A few minutes later, he arrived at his destination and saw a group of members gathered. Noah parked his car and tried to join the group. The members were suddenly surprised by Noah's sudden arrival. The members looked at Noah attentively, and he was confused by that.

Confused, Noah greeted them. Without a warm reply, they oppressed Noah. He was accused of being a spy, even though all this time Noah had never gathered with his gang because he had other activities, namely selling. Noah, who heard this, tried to explain it slowly to them. However, they were provoked by emotions, one of them was Lowe. He was very emotional towards Noah due to his long absence and felt comfortable coming to their base. Lowe continued to badmouth Noah and corner him, to the point that when Noah denied it, Lowe fell silent angrily. And suddenly Selen took a baseball bat behind his back and beat Noah until he was unconscious. Noah was dragged by Selen and Tykem and put into the trunk of their car. Then they left.

Noah and Lowe, Selen, and Tykem are taken to a place where gangster officers are waiting for them. When they arrived there, Selen, in a weak state, was thrown into the hut. There he lay limp and still being tortured until he said why he never appeared, and he was accused of being a 'Snitcher'. In the room it turned out that Tashard, Deshaud and Chalondra were waiting for Noah. Deshaud also tried to wake Noah by throwing a water bottle at his face. Noah woke up feeling weak and afraid of the atmosphere at that time. Not long afterward, Tashard and Deshaud forced Noah to eat large portions of marijuana until Noah overdosed. Then Noah lay limp and saw Chalondra take out a Glock99 type pistol. Noah also tried to apologize to them for the mistakes Noah made and hoped they would give him a chance. Then Chalondra held Noah's hand and said something, and Deshaud looked at Noah while laughing out loud. Five minutes after Chalondra spoke to Noah, Noah was unconscious and weak due to the effects of the overdose. Chalondra immediately stood up and pointed his gun at Noah's head, without warning he fired 3 bullets into Noah's head. Which made Noah immediately die on the spot with the contents of his head scattering. Then they left Noah's body in the room.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[MA KILLER]

10 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. menjadi sebuah Penghianat dari sebuah faction(Yellow Sand Oroject) yang berujung pembunuhan

5. Sudah

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Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Coba nama depannya cari kembali jangan "Lawson".

[MA KILLER]

1 jam yang lalu, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Coba nama depannya cari kembali jangan "Lawson".

Sudah saya ganti jadi Luis_Andregas, gimana min?

[$Sobersanta$]

Nama "Luis Andregas" sudah digunakan, cari nama yang lain.

[MA KILLER]

7 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Nama "Luis Andregas" sudah digunakan, cari nama yang lain.

sudah saya ganti jadi Lipeon_Zarael saya rasa nama itu tidak ada yang pakai

[$Sobersanta$]

Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

[Matchalattee]

Review

[Matchalattee]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.