farelalhasby [CN] Galeo_Cassius to Dion_Kenwood (deutz)

[Deutz]

UCP Name: deutz

Old Character: Galeo_Cassius

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/302419-galeo_cassius-deutz/?do=findComment&comment=2978647

 

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New Character: Dion_Kenwood

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: USA

 

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Reason for name change request:

Bosan.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail :

 

/myid :

 

/mp:

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Galeo Cassius is a man who lives at Los Santos. As a businessman dealing in imported goods, his empire stretched far and wide, and his success was undeniable. But with every triumph came enemies, especially Harry Herold, his arrogant rival. Harry had once been a partner, but greed and ambition drove a wedge between them. Over the years, their competition turned vicious, with both vying for the same high-profile clients and contracts. Galeo, however, always seemed to have the upper hand, landing the deals Harry could only dream of. This stoked a deep resentment within Harry, one that had long passed the point of business rivalry.

One evening, after closing yet another major deal, Galeo received an anonymous message: "Meet me at the old warehouse. The message read, "I have information you’ll want to know." It was vague yet compelling, stirring Galeo's interest. Something about it seemed important enough to investigate, so he decided to follow up, despite his caution. Perhaps it was information about Harry—something he could use against him. Galeo, cautious but intrigued, decided to go. The warehouse was shrouded in shadows, its large, empty expanse amplifying the sound of his footsteps as they bounced off the walls. He called out, but no one answered. As he turns aroung to leave, the door slammed shut. From the shadows emerged Harry, his face twisted with fury. "You've taken everything from me, Galeo," Harry spat, his voice shaking with anger. "The contracts, the connections, the success that was meant for me. Now it's time for you to face the consequences."Galeo barely had time to react. Harry drew a gun from his coat, his hands steady, his eyes filled with cold determination. Galeo tried to reason with him, but Harry was past the point of listening. A single shot echoed through the empty warehouse, and Galeo crumpled to the ground.

As Galeo’s lifeblood seeped into the cold concrete, Harry stood over him, breathing heavily, the weight of his actions settling in. He knew the authorities would come, but it didn’t matter anymore. In that moment, revenge had tasted sweet. The news of Galeo's death shocked the business world. It was reported as a robbery gone wrong, but those who knew the rivalry between Galeo and Harry suspected there was more to the story. As Harry vanished from the city, leaving behind a trail of suspicion, Galeo’s empire crumbled, just as his killer had planned all along.

 

CK Screenshots:

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[Farelalhasby]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[Deutz]

20 minutes ago, Farelalhasby said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Ya.

2. Ya.

3. Ya.

4. Dibunuh pesaing bisnis.

5. Ya.

[Farelalhasby]

Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

[Ooxy]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.