ariqfadhil24 [CN] Liavin_Myllravell to Khaenaan_Ward (jackdaw)

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UCP Name: jackdaw

Old Character: Liavin_Myllravell

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/298475-liavin_myllravell-jackdaw/#comment-2929004

 

 

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New Character: Radamel_Ward

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: USA

 

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Reason for name change request:

ingin mencari pengalaman di FnG baru karena di FnG sebelumnya sudah puas mencari pengalaman sebagai MC

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail

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/myid

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/mp

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CK Story:

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On Thursday 8 August, it was 7 pm, at that time Liavin was relaxing and very bored because there was nothing he could do to entertain him.
Then a few minutes later, Allen, his friend, called Liavin with the aim of coming to the bar and discussing something important and serious.
Then Liavin received orders from Allen, then turned off his phone and hurried to the bar. When he arrived at the bar he started a conversation and was asked by Allen as the opening of the conversation. Not long after, Liavin asked what Allen's real purpose was in calling him to speak, then without further ado, Allen immediately started discussing what he wanted to discuss.

Allen asked about Joseph Carballo, who was his close friend, then Allen said why he had not been seen for 3 months, because in fact Joseph Carballo had been killed by Liavin before because of something that Liavin thought was unfair. Then, nervously and trembling, Liavin spoke asking why Allen was still discussing Joseph Carballo then Allen answered because he was worried and asked what problem had happened to him that made Joseph suddenly disappear. Because Liavin was afraid of being found out if he killed Joseph, he immediately pretended he didn't know anything about Joseph's problem while making body gestures as if he wasn't lying. Then Allen took a deep breath to calm himself down because Allen didn't believe Liavin a little. Allen immediately spoke to Liavin, forcing him to tell him what happened because he wanted to know more about the problem of his good friend who had no news for the last 3 months.

Then because Liavin started to feel uncomfortable because he was forced to answer, he spoke angrily and accidentally slipped his words, which could make Allen more convinced that Liavin was the one who killed Joseph. Then he panicked and changed the conversation so as not to discuss Joseph. Not long after, Allen was convinced and pointed his gun at Liavin. Suddenly Liavin was shocked, not that he was afraid, but instead he took his gun to fight Allen. Then there was a shooting in the house which caused very serious chaos. Glass, refrigerator, beer bottles fell due to the shock. But unfortunately for Liavin, he lost in the shootfire with Allen because he was in an open position and was easy to shoot. Then when Liavin was on the verge of death, he still had time to apologize to Allen and greet his prospect, Mateo. Then Allen cursed Liavin while holding back the tears that wanted to come out of his eyes and left Liavin lying in the house lifeless.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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1. Done cek to https://www.editpad.org/tool/id/konverter-kasus

2. Done 10 SS.

3. Done tidak ada property 1 pun.

4. Membalas dendam teman nya yang di bunuh oleh Liavin sebelum nya.

5. Done cek SS.

@Ariqfadhil24

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Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Diberi tanda diatas screenshotnya pada screenshot OOC Jail, /mp dan /myid.
2. Coba nama depannya cari lagi jangan "Radamel" itu nama depannya famouse lebih ke pemain bola "Radamel Falcao".

[$Arzhaaxj$]

Sudah saya perbaiki min tolong di cek @Ariqfadhil24

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Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

[Ooxy]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.