$Izymoneysniper$ Posted August 1, 2024 Posted August 1, 2024 Derrick Moya A hypermodified 1964 Chevrolet Impala had just parked across the Monte Vista Community Housing. There’d be three cultured chicanos, climbing out of their low rider with a shining piece of pole in each of their hands, ushering themselves back into their bolthole (it was located inside one of the housing projects). An eleven year old kid named Derrick Moya stared meticulously at the entourage as they walked past him, playing scenarios in his head about what they had done prior to their arrival. Despite of being “forced to put on a blindfold, muzzle and earplugs” by his Hispanic lower middle class parents in order to keep him intact, the observer savant Derrick discerned the fact that he was living in a gang infested environment since the day he was born, where he had no other option than witnessing illicit trades and blood shatters. He suffered for years living in that place, he wished he could bring justice and save everyone, all at once. Derrick grew up hating violence, and like every other hood kid these days, he wanted to make it out of the cruelity by engaging in some brief stints in his early age, from taking shifts at the nearest carwash, to babysitting toddlers in the most prosperous part of Los Santos, swirling around the circle of class-skipping, he got nothing to lose. Everything was running plainly for this half Mexican teenager until the life changing experience came through when a multibillionaire from Richman, one of the babysitted baby's parents, acknowledged his strong determination to lift himself up and decided to adopt him in a very heartbeat. His life eventually changed, but his robust urge and obsession to make his former place he called home a better place not. Living in a 9 million house of Richman, driving a decent sports car (which was way above standard in Los Santos already), the newly graduated Derrick didn't have to go the extra miles to make ends meet anymore as he had been wrapped around the Caucasian boujee's arms for the past few years. Despite of being rich and glazed with fragile emotions, Derrick had only one job, and it was going back to the bottomless pit of his past. But instead of being a caped crusader, bat-like vigilante, swerving around with the highest tech one-seated car, kicking asses like there's no tomorrow, he thought about a more noble thing to begin with, which was enrolling himself in a police department. He painstakingly started maintaining a good physique, and sharpening his cerebral before entering the nearest LSPD recruitment, in hope that he could walk out with a golden ticket to bring justice and fairness. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/318750-cn-miguel-santoyo-to-derrick-moya-jameselsworth/#comment-3178623 Account UCP yang saya miliki: JamesElsworth Account Forum yang saya miliki: $Izymoneysniper$ Saya Izymoneysniper selaku pemilik account UCP JamesElsworth bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Derrick Moya) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
DaffaRexandro Posted August 1, 2024 Posted August 1, 2024 Sebelum @DaffaRexandro melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$Izymoneysniper$ Posted August 1, 2024 Author Posted August 1, 2024 Just now, DaffaRexandro said: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) 1. Tidak 2. 2 tahun 3. Namechange 4. Tidak, hanya JamesElsworth 5. Tidak, hanya Izymoneysniper 6. Rumah
DaffaRexandro Posted August 1, 2024 Posted August 1, 2024 Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan A.I. untuk menyusun cerita karakter? @Izymoneysniper
$Izymoneysniper$ Posted August 1, 2024 Author Posted August 1, 2024 1 minute ago, DaffaRexandro said: Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan A.I. untuk menyusun cerita karakter? @Izymoneysniper Tidak sama sekali
DaffaRexandro Posted August 1, 2024 Posted August 1, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Izymoneysniper, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @DaffaRexandro JG:RP Helper Team 1
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