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In the forgotten corner of the city there lived an eighteen year old teenager who was involved in a criminal case this teenager named Cuartero Collejas was born to his parents in Mexico and he was born in 2005. His life was filled with instability the family broke up and Cuartero Collejas fell into a circle of dubious friends so he still committed crimes, Cuartero Collejas who initially only stole liquor from a shop instead became more involved or involved in more dangerous actions with his gang. Cuartero Collejas stole a motorbike and sold it to meet his daily needs but the deeper he is immersed in the criminal world the more difficult it is for him to find a way out, when the police chased Cuartero Collejas and all his colleagues felt trapped he actually knew that his future was getting bleak but he couldn't escape the dark circle that had shackled him. Now Cuartero Collejas must choose to remain in darkness or look for a light that he may never find.

 

Whatever the risk befalls him Cuartero Collejas continues to carry out criminal activities continuously until he thinks about what the future will be like or what the future will be like. Cuartero Collejas after a long time he had not seen his parents after several months ago he felt extraordinary sadness, Cuartero Collejas took the initiative to plan to meet his parents namely his mother and father even though they were still in the same area they all did not give news to him. Each of them with each other because everyone has lived separately and no one communicates anymore like in the past but fortunately Cuartero Collejas remembers his parents namely his mother and father. Evening arrived Cuartero Collejas was confused about whether to look for his parents or join his friends in stealing liquor from a shop, earlier in the day Cuartero Collejas had been invited by all his friends to plan to steal liquor from a shop. This was the most difficult choice for him but Cuartero Collejas preferred to go along with his friends to steal liquor from a small shop.

 

On a pitch black night Cuartero Collejas and his friends started to steal liquor from a small shop so that it would be easier for them all to carry out the action. Long story short Cuartero Collejas and his friends managed to steal liquor from a small shop very easily they carried out such a criminal act because they were all used to doing things like that after successfully carrying out the action they all partied that night with drank the stolen liquor. There were several of Cuartero Collejas friends who lost consciousness due to consuming too much alcohol or what could be called an overdose but they all didn't care about that they all continued to party happily with alcohol. In the middle of the night Cuartero Collejas told his female friend to visit the party and the female agreed to Cuartero Collejas invitation. When she arrived at the location the female also invited her friends and the place became busy.

 

After a few months later Cuartero Collejas and his friends flew to Los Santos using an airplane to live their lives better, all of them Cuartero Collejas and all his friends did not want to repeat the negative things they had previously done at that time namely stealing and carrying out other criminal activities. Finally they all got their jobs and found their own places to live. It could be said that they all went their separate ways. Even though Cuartero Collejas separated from his friends he always let them know where he was when he had free time or free time to have fun or meet again. When they met face to face they told each other about their respective jobs at a restaurant while enjoying the food they ordered.

 

 

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Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
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Account Forum yang saya miliki:

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Saya Rojas selaku pemilik account UCP Rojas bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Cuartero_Collejas) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Tolong jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan sejujurnya (Jawaban anda akan menentukan keberhasilan CS ini) :

  1. Apakah kamu membuat Character Story ini menggunakan AI generated, bantuan tangan orang lain, atau bahkan hasil copy-paste dari CS milik orang lain?
  2. Apakah nama Character kamu ini tidak termasuk Famous Name? (Silahkan cek sendiri di google)
  3. Apakah kamu bersedia untuk menerima hukuman (in-game) jika terdapat jawaban yang bohong dari pertanyaan-pertanyaan diatas?

Pastikan kamu menjawab pertanyaan diatas ini dengan sejujurnya, sebab saya tau mana jawaban bohong & mana jawaban yang jujur  |  Pastikan kamu membuat Character Story ini menggunakan hasil pemikiran sendiri jika ingin diapproved oleh staff.

 

Note : Tag saya dalam reply untuk mempercepat proses character story kamu.

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On 22/7/2024 at 07.15, molsky said:

@Rojas Buat tambahan development ending cerita bagaimana dia sampai di los santos.

Sudah saya tambahkan satu paragraf sebagai tambahan development ending cerita

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Dear @Rojas,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

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