dimasjb Ff Posted June 29, 2024 Posted June 29, 2024 (edited) Nicholas Barracho One day on December 4 2000, a child named Nicholas Barracho was born, who is usually called Nicho. He was born in the city of Los Santos. Nicho was born into a fairly rich family. When Nicho was 3 years old, his parents left Nicho because they had jobs outside. city, Nicho had to live with his grandmother and aunt at home. After a few years, Nicho was already 7 years old and he was going to be sent to an elementary school near where he lived. One day when Nicho came home from school and Nicho was resting at his house, Nicho heard the sound of broken glass. Nicho rushed to look at him. He saw his grandmother lying on the floor. Nicho cried while calling his aunt. His aunt heard Nicho's cries and immediately took his grandmother to the nearest hospital. While at the hospital. After several hours, his grandmother woke up from fainting, and Nicho went into his grandmother's room to be treated. After a few days, Nicho and his grandmother returned home and continued to be treated at home. At home he always looked after his grandmother who was still sick. While he was looking after his grandmother, Nicho became increasingly worried that his grandmother would die because her illness was getting worse. After taking care of his grandmother for a long time, his grandmother's illness finally started to get better. After several years, Nicho is now 25 years old. On his 25th birthday, his mother bought him a car and 1 company in Los Santos. Nicho was very happy because he had been given a very big gift. Nicho worked as a company boss at the company he bought. His mother. After several years he is now a successful person. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Dyimas211 Account Forum yang saya miliki:dimasjbff Saya dimasjb Ff selaku pemilik account UCP Dyimas211 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Nicholas Barracho) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited June 30, 2024 by dimasjb Ff
Verss1140 Posted June 29, 2024 Posted June 29, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini @dimasjb Ff: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
dimasjb Ff Posted June 29, 2024 Author Posted June 29, 2024 (edited) (Ya) ( Kurang dari 1 bulan ) (Tidak) (Tidak) (Tidak) (Di rumah) Edited June 30, 2024 by dimasjb Ff
Verss1140 Posted June 30, 2024 Posted June 30, 2024 9 jam yang lalu, dimasjb Ff said: (Ya) ( / 1 - 3 bulan ) (Tidak) (Tidak) (Tidak) (Di rumah) Disini tertera bahwa kamu baru registrasi pada tanggal 17 Juni 2024, lalu kenapa kamu menjawabnya sudah bermain selama 1 - 3 bulan? Tolong dijawab dengan jujur. @dimasjb Ff
dimasjb Ff Posted June 30, 2024 Author Posted June 30, 2024 (edited) 1 hour ago, Verss1140 said: Disini tertera bahwa kamu baru registrasi pada tanggal 17 Juni 2024, lalu kenapa kamu menjawabnya sudah bermain selama 1 - 3 bulan? Tolong dijawab dengan jujur. @dimasjb Ff Ralat Harusnya kurang 1/3 bulan sir Edited June 30, 2024 by dimasjb Ff
Verss1140 Posted June 30, 2024 Posted June 30, 2024 1 jam yang lalu, dimasjb Ff said: Ralat Harusnya kurang 1/3 bulan sir Kalau begitu, silahkan edit postingan pertama CS kamu pada bagian Questions, ganti dengan "Kurang dari 1 bulan". @dimasjb Ff
dimasjb Ff Posted June 30, 2024 Author Posted June 30, 2024 (edited) Sudah semua. Edited June 30, 2024 by dimasjb Ff
Verss1140 Posted June 30, 2024 Posted June 30, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @dimasjb Ff, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons: Cukup tulis "Kurang dari 1 bulan" saja, tidak perlu tambahkan "- 3". Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Ubah teks character story kamu dalam berbentuk paragraf. Buatlah menjadi 3 bagian paragraf. I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story. Sincerely, @Verss1140 JG:RP Helper Team
Verss1140 Posted June 30, 2024 Posted June 30, 2024 1. Itu masih tidak sesuai. Ubah angka "3" nya menjadi angka "1" pada bagian Questions. 2. Apakah kamu menggunakan bantuan AI atau semacamnya untuk membuat cerita ini? @dimasjb Ff
Verss1140 Posted June 30, 2024 Posted June 30, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @dimasjb Ff, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Verss1140 JG:RP Helper Team
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